(Hot Romance & Mafia Related) New Story OUT NOW! R4R & Promote Your Story HERE!

Well as I was reading your story I really liked how smooth your zooms were, loved the backgrounds you used, and the plot that you had was also one of my favs. I honestly don’t see anything you could change of your story, BUT little tip for future chapters is to keep adding the drama, suspenseful moments, and things like that to keep the reader reading. :blush:
I hope my feedback was a bit useful! :sweat_smile:

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it really was💕

thank you for reading even though it was r4r

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Np :blush:

Congratulations on releasing your new story :partying_face:
Thank you for the thread :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Here’s my story: :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

Title: Squad:Roadtrip
Genre: Horror (includes mystery and romance)
Style: Limelight
IG username: may.i.writeepisode

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6321977372639232
Description:
This was supposed to be a short road trip into the woods with your old high school squad, but the place wants you to stay and uncover ALL it’s gory secrets.

Some features:

  • LGBTQ+
  • 6 LI’s (male & female)
  • choose your sexuality
  • point system
  • Very important choices!
  • CC

Cover:

Some screenshots

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Thank you for this thread🥰
Here’s mine :black_heart:

Title : The Detective Diaries
Genre : Mystery
Style : Limelight
Episodes : 5 (more episodes coming soon)
Link :http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/5178082767077376
Description : You are sent to Greece for a mission. There you meet a hot irresistible guy. Will you be able to focus on your mission? What’s gonna happen when you discover a horrifying secret?

Episode account : O.livia
Ig handle : @olivia.stories_

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Ohh, sounds like a very interesting plot! Best of luck with you story hun! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Thank you​:smiling_face_with_three_hearts::heart:

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Thank you for this thread🥰
Here’s mine :black_heart:

Title : The Detective Diaries
Genre : Mystery
Style : Limelight
Episodes : 5 (more episodes coming soon)
Link :http://episodeinteractive.com/r/s/5178082767077376
Description : You are sent to Greece for a mission. There you meet a hot irresistible guy. Will you be able to focus on your mission? What’s gonna happen when you discover a horrifying secret?

Episode account : O.livia
Ig handle : @olivia.stories_

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