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After going undercover for one case, you end up in the middle of another the serial killer strikes again.

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After going undercover for one case, you end up in the middle of another murder as the serial killer strikes again. Will you be able to catch the killer before it’s to late?

something like that?

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Sounds great! Thank you

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