How do i make my character be scared by another character

My mc is at her locker and i want her to be scared by her friend from behind. Like how would i make her friend creep up behind her and scare her.

Have the camera be zoomed on your MC doing whatever she is doing, then if you want Dramatic Irony—When the reader knows something that one or more of the characters doesn’t—the have like 0.8 seconds of the friend sneaking up on the MC then the friend does boo! animation.

If you want to scare the reader along with the MC then have the MC do something else, keeping the reader engaged, then do a quick zoom and have the friend pop out from behind.

you can just make the friend to walk behing her and make booo and the other frighten can scream…


thank you

doesn’t even have to say boo

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