How does my story sound? Does it sound OK?


#1

Hello! My name is Addi. I was wondering for some feedback. In all my stories I try to add diversity and LBGT+. Each chapter you view as a different character. One is Lesbian, one is straight, and the other one is Bisexual. A character, later on, will be transgender. This book has 3 white triplets, but later on, in the book, they meet 3 black triplets, (Which is not stated, I don’t say in the description "You meet black triplets, lol) But those triplets will be main characters too. It is about triplets who can fly and time travel but later realize 3 other people which are also triplets have different abilities. They all become a team and work to stop terrorists. The book is called: Trio Of Travelers. Would you read this book? They also meet Muslims, and aisans. When they build the team up. Am I keeping it diverse enough? Or do I need more? Or am I going over the top?


#2

Thanks!-Addi


#3

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#4

Sorry girly!


#5

I think it sounds pretty good!


#6

Sounds great, but good luck on writing that. Sounds like A LOT of work hhah! I will definitely read it! XO


#7

I am almost done! I am putting all my effort into it.


#8

Tysm!


#9

And tysm, for saying you will read it. :smiley:


#10

Love the diversity! Most stories don’t have that. Good luck writing!


#11

Your welcome. I think its a great ideal its different and I well check it out!


#12

Haha Could you send the link? That would be WAAYY easier :wink: xo


#13

Tysm!!


#14

It is not done, but I will when it is done! :smiley:


#15

Tysm!


#16

np :smile:


#17

Have wrote anything? If you have, I will check it out!


#18

I am working on something currently! It’s called Wanted, it’s not finished though. :sweat_smile:


#19

Okay!!! I will read it when it is finished! Just PM when it is done!


#20

Thanks! I’ll check out yours when it’s finished, too.