How does this look

I’m just starting out
Can you pretend the white lines aren’t there
Be honest how does this look
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Newest One:
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October 11,2019:
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need to work on the outline, and maybe add some shading to lips and fix nose.

I made a new one here it is


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tbh it kinda looks messy

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And how do I fix it

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Kinda creepy.

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Thanks

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What app do you use?

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Ibis paint x

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Here is some stuff you can do to improve your art:
Make the lines cleaner, and maybe a bit straight(use stabilizer) and color in the white spots in the body. As well as highlight more and shade more.

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Ok thanks

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Yeah sorry misspelled it

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In my opinion it looks weird. Sorry.

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It ok

It’s looks kind of creepy and not that good. It looks a lot cartoonish

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Give me advice please

Someone already gave you advice.

I want different types of advice

For me, it looks as if you used a bucket tool, and drew everything in a single layer. The base colors are messy, and the base colors as well as outline is jagged, thick and weird. Sorry if this comes off as rude, but it’s an honest opinion.

As for advice, I suggest avoiding the bucket tool and using many different layers for each base color. A new base color layer for the skin, mouth, hair, eyes and clothes. Use a 3.5 sized brush for the outline with a canvas of 2000x2000, I use 4.0 for the hair.
Try to avoid drawing lines slowly, this makes it jagged and curvy.

Example:


The top line is drawing in a slow manner and the bottom a swift line, notice the difference.

For shading, make sure to use the clipping tool
Example:
(Sorry for the terrible outlining and shading lmao.)


Notice how I separate the outline for hair and face, as well as the base color and shading.


I think this is what I have to advice for now, hope it helps. :v:t4:

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