How does this theme sound?

Hi guys, I’m currently writing a story, and would like to get your opinion about my theme:
Cira Woods, a hot chick, a student at Rosewood highschool, and also the person next in line to become a mafia leader of the Golden Souls! After Cira kills her abusive father, she finds that she was the next heir. Along the way, two mysterious vampires show up in her town and they started causing mysterious deaths of a few people, including Cira’s best friend. What will happen to Cira? and will these guys ever leave the town?

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i like it but maybe it’s to mutch, becouse the mafia part and vampire part could easely be two diffrend stories


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