This is my script for this scene:
INT. ABANDONED GOVT BUNKER - DAY
@cut to zone 2
@KLARIZA spot 1.039 365 62 in zone 3 THEN KLARIZA walks to spot 1.039 178 69 in zone 2 AND GEORGIA spot 1.066 366 51 in zone 3 THEN GEORGIA walks to spot 1.066 264 48 in zone 2 THEN GEORGIA faces left AND KLARIZA faces left
@KLARIZA faces right AND GEORGIA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
KLARIZA (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Let’s go.
&GEORGIA is listen_nod_neutral_loop
@KLARIZA is rear AND GEORGIA is rear AND GEORGIA faces right AND KLARIZA faces left
&GEORGIA moves to layer 0 AND KLARIZA moves to layer 1
@GEORGIA walks to spot 0.906 220 56 AND GEORGIA does it while walk_neutral_loop_rear AND KLARIZA walks to spot 0.906 144 64 AND KLARIZA does it while walk_neutral_loop_rear THEN KLARIZA is rear AND GEORGIA is rear
&transition fade out black
Not that I’m great at smooth directing, but…
I’m pretty sure the nod will be interrupted, right? There should be a pause between these two for however long you want the nod to last. Otherwise, you can make it into an @ rather than an & for the nod animation to run to completion.
I’m pretty sure that’s not a valid directing command; it’ll need an @ as well as a time specification.
There’s a lot to unpack here.
Klariza will enter first, and Georgia will enter after Klariza stops. When Klariza stops, she’ll stand idle. When Georgia stops, there will be a short pause, then Klariza will turn around and Georgia will begin shifting her weight.
What’s the goal with this scene? I’d recommend this:
&KLARIZA spot 1.039 365 62 in zone 3 AND GEORGIA spot 1.066 366 51 in zone 3
##Place them first
@KLARIZA walks to spot 1.039 178 69 in zone 2 THEN KLARIZA faces right
##Klariza walks in and turns around, watching Georgia enter while doing idle
@GEORGIA walks to spot 1.066 264 48 in zone 2 THEN GEORGIA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
##Georgia enters and immediately begins to shift her weight
Got all of this part done.
Go for this,
They are outside of the scene(the first set of spotting) Then, Klariza and Georgia should enter together. (Second spotting) Then Klariza faces right AND Georgia shifts her weight,
Ahhh, in that case:
&KLARIZA spot 1.039 365 62 in zone 3 AND GEORGIA spot 1.066 366 51 in zone 3
##Place them first
&KLARIZA walks to spot 1.039 178 69 in zone 2 THEN KLARIZA faces right
##Klariza walks in and turns around, but the & sign will allow Georgia to enter at the same time
@GEORGIA walks to spot 1.066 264 48 in zone 2 THEN GEORGIA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
##Georgia enters and immediately begins to shift her weight
Only actual difference is the & when Klariza walks in, so that Georgia doesn’t have to wait.
Is there a way that you can get rid of the hashtags so I know exactly what to put in?
Sorry if i sound bossy!
LOL no worries.
(If you put the hashtags in, nothing will happen, those are script notes and they won’t change your commands. But here’s what I typed with no hashtags:)
&KLARIZA spot 1.039 365 62 in zone 3 AND GEORGIA spot 1.066 366 51 in zone 3
&KLARIZA walks to spot 1.039 178 69 in zone 2 THEN KLARIZA faces right
@GEORGIA walks to spot 1.066 264 48 in zone 2 THEN GEORGIA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
Thank you!
Eyy, glad I could help!
It looks way better! I will PM you if I need more help!
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