ELI finds ANNA outside sleeping in the cold, takes her in and lays her on the couch
ELI
(I’m sorry…)
ELI
(She needs something warm)
ELI puts a jacket around ANNA
&ELI’s eyes widen*
ANNA
S-She doesn’t… love me anymore…
ELI
No, Anna! Wake up!
ANNA wakes up
ELI
I’m right here and I love you!
ANNA gets up and hugs ELI tight, thinking she’s dreaming
ELI is shocked
ANNA
Please at least love me in my dream!
ANNA
The real Eli doesn’t love me anymore…! Please…
Any suggestions?!
Can you give context to what’s happening in the scene and what tone you’re pushing for?
Eli pulled a really hurtful prank on Anna. And cute and romantic yet emotional for the tone
What was the prank?
Maybe you could have her cry in Eli’s arms while Eli tries to have a internal chat with themselves about how they screwed up and shouldn’t have hurt her.
Can you give me an example so I have some dialogue ideas to go off of
“Break Up” Prank
Example in what way? Like dialogue?
Maybe
ELI
(What was I thinking?)
(Why did I even think this would work?)
@ELI is breathe_deep
(She’s crying all because of my stupid mistake.)
Yes
There’s the examples.