I have done all the character customization and stuff but i dont know how to start it and make people want to keep reading. the description is You are just a waitress at a coffee shop but what will happen when a kind but hot customer tells you to meet him on the hill at sunset?
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May be give introduction about the Main Character like where she lives, about her family and friends or you can show her daily routine which includes working in coffee shop.
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Yes thank you 
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Mention not
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Maybe you could start it off with the MC waking up then goon from there?
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Oh sorry
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Hi I Would Like To Help,
I Would Like as a reader to have a choice or the menu to choose the look. As a Writer, You Can Start The Story By Saying How And Why She Became a Waitress in a Coffee Shop, and How was Her Childhood and Growing Up
Hope This Help
Yes I have let the reader choose the look and name of them their best friend and love interest
Thank you for helping me
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You can start by an emotional part in the future (Like the last emotional part in the story)
I like a story that makes us see something emotional at the start, I get curious and want to keep reading and found out what happened
Good idea thank you I will use all of this
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Why not introduce yourself as a creator? I’m sure you have a special personality so influence your work with it!
Or you can find a place where the story gets really interesting and then explain how they got there like:
NARR
Let’s pause for a second.
Maybe I jumped to far ahead.
Let me explain.
My name is (NAME).
I work at a coffee shop in ___.
It’s just my opinion but I feel like you should make the bio for your story more interesting. Do something that drives the reader in if you know what I mean. Your story sounds good but add some more spice to your bio. When you publish your story let me know plz!
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Your Welcome
Yeah that’s what I was thinking too but I don’t really know what I want to happen in the story
Ok i will
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I was maybe thinking to make the description this
You have just got over an abusive relationship with your ex Aiden Matthews who has recently gone missing. Will you ever live happily ever after? Or is he coming back for revenge.
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Is that more interesting?