How to articulate this? help please

Hey, my characters are customizable but there will be talked about some eye colors through out the story. I’m not English and don’t know how to articulate this for the reader. How would you articulate this?

Will eye color be customizable?

If the reader can customise eye colour you could say something like:
I would not recommend changing this characters eye colour, the default colour is mentioned throughout the story, and changing it will cause a misalignment with the narration of this story.

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let’s say the reader chooses green eye colour. you want to say something like ‘her eyes were green lile blabla’ but for every eye colour? is that it?

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No, I want a NARRATOR message before you can customize that says something like “if you change the eye colour it might not match with the storyline” but I don’t know how to word it right…

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Thanks, that’s sounds good!

A/N: You can change eye color, but it may not match with descriptions in the story.

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But would what you suggest be possible?

Thanks, that sounds great!

yes it is. the customisation code for they eyes will look something like this

@CHARACTER changes eyeColor into Green Emerald

so underneath you will write
gain green_eye
}

the same with the other colours.

then when you want to use that colour in a sentence

you write

if(green_eye){
NARRATOR
Her eyes were green…
}
if(brown_eye){
NARRATOR
Her eyes were brown…
}

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