How to continue a story about a girl who was abused

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How do I continue to write about a girl who was abused by her stepmother until her stepsister called Social Services and got placed into foster care?

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You could write about life after she’s adopted or something.

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Maybe the day she was adopted?

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Yes and he trying to adapt to her new home and family

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Thanks! Can you help me with some dialogue? (If it’s not too much to ask)

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Sure. I’m not that great but I’ll try.

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So…
What should the dialogue for the day she gets adopted be?

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Maybe she’s waking up in a room and the person at the foster care place tells her to dress nicely because their is a couple looking to adopt.

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Then the worker begins to give the couple a tour.

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Okay! And when they’re meet Anna they say…

“Her, she’s the one.”

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Yes and Annas surprised

“Wait…me?”

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And the man says:

“Yes, what’s your name?”

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And Anna’s stuttering a little bit and acting very nervous.

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Alright so…

“M-My name i-is A-Anna.”

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Then they ask how old she is.

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And she says

“I-I’m 13.”

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Yes. The worker then tells her to go play with the other children and the worker and the couple start talking out the details.

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The details of the adoption?

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Well I think before that the couple should ask about Anna then they talk about adoption.

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Ask things like?
Also, could I PM you about these details? And would you be open to helping me from time to time?

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