How to end a Chapter with 2 labels


#1

i have 2 labels

but in my story the reader can change one but in my story i don’t know how to end … when the first label ends then the 2nd label starts… and the chapter should be over … please help me


#2

You have to create a 3rd label
And put it at the end of the chapter and then add that in between the labels

Then code it in
For example

CHAR
Should I go home or to the club?

choice
“Go home” {
goto label home

} “Go to the club” {
goto club

}

label home

@CHAR exits right

CHAR
Yay I’m home! Sleep time.

goto label end_chapter

label club

@CHAR exits left

CHAR
Yay I’m at the club! Drink time

label end_chapter


#3

hmmm I have solve the problem with 2 labels but now i have another problem… at the end my author character say something then it should end the chapter but then again my author charater comes and talk the same things… :frowning:


#4

Can I see your script


#5

choice
"Yes Okay"{
goto Yes_Okay
}“No.Thanks”{
goto No_Thanks
}

label Yes_Okay

@MS GREY exits right
@YOU exits right

@YOU changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
@YOU changes hairColor into Yellow

@MS GREY spot 1.158 70 95
@MS GREY faces right
@YOU spot 1.060 254 110

    YOU (talk_angry)
What did your .. Professional Hairdresser done to me???

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_argue_angry)
Why do you laugh??

    YOU (talk_argue_angry)
Are you jocking me right now?!

@MS GREY is laugh_crackup

    YOU (talk_confused_mindblown)
It was a bad idea to come with you!!

@MS GREY is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@YOU is cry_sniff_sad_loop
@MS GREY spot 1.158 160 95

    MS GREY (talk_squat_peekaboo)
Darling. listen..

@YOU is cry_sniff_sad_loop

    MS GREY (talk_squat_happy)
Darling it is not so bad

    MS GREY (talk_gossip)
It's the easiest way to change that colour into your colour again

    YOU (talk_unsure)
Really ?

@MS GREY is admire_happy

    YOU (talk_argument_angry)
But this time i will choice my colour!!

    MS GREY (talk_think_neutral)
Fine but lets go now

@YOU exits right AND MS GREY exits right

INT. COLOSSEUM CONCERT - NIGHT

if (Yes_Okay) {

}

@MS GREY changes into MS_GREY_PARTY_RED

@zoom reset

@cut to zone 2

@YOU walks to spot 1.069 188 100
@MS GREY walks to spot 1.146 68 88

    YOU (talk_sarcastic)
Oh yeah we are late

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle

    MS GREY (talk_unsure)
We are the first ones please behave like a lady

@MS GREY is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@YOU is eyeroll_subtle

@cut to zone 3
@YOU walks to spot 1.069 188 100
@MS GREY walks to spot 1.146 68 88

    MS GREY (talk_think_neutral)
So darling I see where the casting director is and you look around here, maybe you find a new friend or a rich boyfriend

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle

@YOU faces left

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle
@MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy

@MS GREY exits left

@YOU walks to spot 0.827 196 187
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@YOU is think_rubchin
@pause for a beat

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(What should I sing?)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(Maybe hello- from Adele)

@pause for a beat

    YOU (idle_happy_loop)
(Because of this song she bring me here)

    YOU (listen_nod_happy_loop)
(Yup I will sing this song)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(This song might bring me luck..)

@pause for a beat

@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (idle_sad_loop)
(I wish my Boyfriend was here)

    YOU (flirt_coy)
(He would sing his favourite song from Bruno Mars - uptown funk)

@YOU is laugh_giggle
@zoom reset
@YOU is search_neutral
@YOU faces left
@YOU is search_neutral
@YOU faces right

    YOU (idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop)
Nobody is watching.. so

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh doh, doh doh doh

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@zoom reset
@pause for a beat

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh doh, doh doh doh

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@pause for a beat

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh
Aaaaaow!

@zoom reset

    YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
This shit, that ice cold
Michelle Pfeiffer, that white gold
This one, for them hood girls
Them good girls, straight masterpieces.
Stylin', while in
Livin' it up in the city
Got Chucks on with Saint Laurent
Gotta kiss myself, I'm so pretty

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@YOU is kiss_smooch
@YOU is laugh_giggle

@zoom reset

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
I'm too hot (hot damn)
Called a police and a fireman
I'm too hot (hot damn)
Make a dragon wanna retire, man

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@pause for a beat

@YOU faces left
YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
Girls hit your hallelujah (wooh)
Girls hit your hallelujah (wooh)
‘Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you (wooh)

@zoom reset
YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
‘Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you
’Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you
Saturday night, and we in the spot
Don’t believe me, just watch, come on!

@YOU is dance_club_happy_loop
@pause for a beat

@CINDY changes into CINDY_default

@CINDY walks to spot 1.058 100 94 AND CINDY does it while run_cry_embarrassed_loop
sound footsteps_fast
@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop
sound sob_female

@YOU is react_gasp_dismayed

    YOU (idle_sad_loop)
(Oh no.. I made someone cry because of my singing)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(But why her clothes are dirty?)

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop
sound sob_female

@YOU is eyeroll_subtle

@YOU walks to spot 0.959 230 142 AND YOU does it while walk_worried_loop
@YOU faces left

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop

    YOU (callout_neutral)
Excuse me...

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Umm..

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Can I help you?

    YOU (talk_unsure)
What happened?

    CINDY (talk_sad_exhausted)
I was eating a hot dog with ketchup and while that a girl came and pushed me and my hot dog fell on my clothes

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

    CINDY (talk_sad_exhausted)
The ketchup just squirts out of the hot dog .. so so much ketchup

@YOU is think_rubchin

    YOU (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Maybe next time you don't put ketchup in your hot dog

@YOU is laugh_chuckle

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    YOU (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I'm sorry that this happened to you

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

    YOU (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Did this girl even apologize to you?

    CINDY (talk_sad_serious_loop)
No ...

@pause for a beat

    CINDY (talk_argue_defensive)
She said... Oops the next time you must watch out

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@CINDY is idle_sad_serious_loop

    YOU (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
What a B*tch

    CINDY (talk_sad)
I don't know what should I do now, today is the last chance to take a part in this audition

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop

@YOU is think_rubchin

    YOU (talk_exhausted)
Wait here, I'll come back in some minutes

@YOU exits right AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
sound running_heels

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

@pause for a beat
@CINDY moves to layer 1
@CINDY spot 1.058 103 -47
@CINDY is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@CINDY moves to layer 1

@SHANNON enters from right to screen right
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.846 155 192
@SHANNON moves to layer 0
@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic
sound phone_ring2
@SHANNON is read_phone_neutral_loop

    SHANNON (talk_phone_surprised_happy_loop)
Oh hey Babe, I have a good feeling, I'm under the ten best

    SHANNON (talk_phone_excited_loop)
The casting director likes me already, she said i have a good taste of style and she just need to hear me singing in some minute and i will be under the 10 best

    SHANNON (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
And there is a girl, she was eating a hot dog and the hot dog fell all over her clothes, ketchup style you know

@SHANNON is laugh_crackup

@CINDY is standup_neutral

    CINDY (idle_terrified_loop)
(How can she say such a lie about me? Why would i like to push someone!)

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@SHANNON is listen_nod_happy_loop

@SHANNON is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON is listen_phone_excited_loop

@CINDY faces left
@CINDY is idle_sad_loop
@follow CINDY to screen center in zone 1 AND CINDY does it while run_cry_embarrassed_loop
sound running_heels

    CINDY (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Why these bad things always happen to me?

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON is read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat

@YOU spot 1.076 239 132

@YOU enters from right to screen right AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@YOU walks to spot 1.076 239 132
@pause for a beat
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON is react_gasp_dismayed
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.169 81 109 AND SHANNON does it while walk_worried_loop
@SHANNON faces right
SHANNON (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Are you ok sweety ??
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Can you hear me sweet?
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@YOU is faint
@YOU spot 1.060 352 111
@SHANNON is react_scream_horror
sound scream_female

@pan to zone 1
@follow CINDY to screen left in zone 2 AND CINDY does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
sound running_heels

@CINDY walks to spot 1.054 237 150
@CINDY faces left
@CINDY is react_shocked_gasp
@CINDY walks to spot 1.047 250 130 AND CINDY faces left
CINDY (talk_fight_angry_loop)
What did you done to her, you monster!!
@CINDY moves to layer 0
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic
SHANNON (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Nothing! She was running at here and suddenly faint

    CINDY (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I'm sorry...

@CINDY is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    SHANNON (talk_sarcastic)
Whatever..

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

@CINDY is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    SHANNON (talk_doubtful)
Now go get her something to drink

    CINDY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Oh okay..

    SHANNON (talk_complain_angry)
Do something useful only once, goooo!!!!

@CINDY moves to layer 0

@CINDY faces left
@CINDY exits left AND CINDY does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON spot 1.103 122 -51
@SHANNON is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop

@YOU is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken
@YOU spot 1.060 387 123

    SHANNON (talk_sit_legsup_neutral_loop)
Ohh sweety how do you feel, are you ok?

@SHANNON is standup_neutral
@SHANNON spot 1.169 157 105

    SHANNON (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
It will be all fine, the dirty girl will bring you something to drink

    YOU (sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken)
Dirty girl?...


    SHANNON (talk_exhausted)
Where is that weirdo?!!

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@add Cup Plastic Blue to CINDY

@CINDY moves to layer 0
@CINDY enters from left to screen left
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.169 253 96 AND SHANNON faces left

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Where you took so long!?

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

    SHANNON (talk_accuse_angry)
Don't roll your eyes on me

@YOU is standup_neutral
@YOU spot 1.013 152 141

@CINDY is react_claphands_happy
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CINDY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
How are you feeling?

    SHANNON (talk_pointup_pretentious)
Give her the f.... water!!!

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
I have got water for you, you will feel better after drinking it

    YOU (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Thanks

@remove Cup Plastic Blue from CINDY

@add Cup Plastic Blue to YOU

@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop

    NARRATOR
Shannon, Shannon come in the roon 128 please

@YOU faces right

    SHANNON (talk_excited_happy)
Yes! It's my turn

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy

@YOU is listen_nod_happy_loop

    SHANNON (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Good luck sweety

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

@YOU is idle_happy_loop

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Thank you

@YOU faces left

    SHANNON (talk_doubtful)
And you... don't make her dirty

@SHANNON exits left

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CINDY (talk_think_neutral)
Are you feeling better

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Yes thanks for the water

@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop

@CINDY is idle_happy_loop

@remove Cup Plastic Blue from YOU

    YOU (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
So is this the girl who was pushed you ?

    CINDY (talk_angry)
Yes

@YOU is think_rubchin

@CINDY walks to spot 1.089 71 126
@YOU walks to spot 1.013 254 135 AND YOU faces left

    CINDY (talk_sad_serious_loop)
She is very nice to you, but why she can't be to me nice too

    YOU (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
Don't worry about this, I'm nice to you

    YOU (talk_think_neutral)
But the way I have got something for you, for change clothes

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
You are the best!

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Come lets change

@CINDY is listen_nod_happy_loop

@YOU exits right
@CINDY exits right

@CINDY changes into CINDY_MINT

@YOU enters from right to screen left and YOU faces right
@YOU walks to spot 1.035 64 130
@YOU faces right

@pause for a beat

@CINDY enters from right to screen center
@CINDY walks to spot 1.096 170 128 AND CINDY does it while walk_runway_loop
@CINDY faces left

@zoom on 505 442 to 315% in 0
@CINDY is primp_neutral

@CINDY is laugh_giggle

@zoom reset

@YOU is flirt_shy

    YOU (talk_excited_happy)
You look gorgeous!!

    CINDY (talk_primp_neutral)
I know in the bathroom are mirrors

@CINDY is laugh_giggle
@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_pointup_happy)
A positive attitude!

    YOU (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
I like that

@CINDY is kiss_blow_happy

@pan to zone 1
@MS GREY enters from left to screen center

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA changes into JULIUS_MOM_DEWIKA_SEXY
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA enters from left to screen left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA walks to spot 1.183 79 111
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat

    MS GREY (callout_neutral)
Darling!! come right here I want to introduce you the casting director and also my best friend since we were 16 years old

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is laugh_giggle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is read_phone_neutral_loop

@pan to zone 2

@YOU faces left

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy
@YOU faces right
@YOU is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@YOU is think_rubchin

@CINDY is react_shocked_awe

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
She just calls you Darling, do you know her?

    YOU (talk_unsure)
I think we are something like friends..

    YOU (talk_shrug_concerned)
Why?

@CINDY is laugh_crackup

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@CINDY is laugh_crackup

    CINDY (talk_sarcastic)
Oh nothing, she is just part of the jury and will rate us

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat

@CINDY is laugh_giggle

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop

    CINDY (talk_unsure)
Hello ?

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop

@CINDY is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop

@YOU spot 1.035 113 132
@YOU moves to layer 1
@CINDY moves to layer 0

@YOU faces left

@YOU spot 1.035 61 134
@CINDY spot 1.096 139 130
@pause for a beat

@YOU spot 1.035 -14 127

@CINDY spot 1.096 69 122
@YOU spot 1.035 -27 126

@pan to zone 1

@pan to zone 2
@CINDY is idle_happy_loop

    CINDY (talk_greet_neutral)
Bye my Boo

@pan to zone 1

    MS GREY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
This is my girl

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (think_rubchin)
(I think I know her...)

@MS GREY is idle_happy_pose

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Oh no this is the Bhoot *Ghost* ... which my Beta *Son* hanging out with


    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (think_rubchin)
I must behave professional, I'm the casting director

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_greet_neutral)
Hello dear, welcome...

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (cough)
... not welcome

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_greet_neutral)
Welcome to the song audition

    YOU (talk_greet_shy)
Hello... BiT**

@YOU is cough

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (deepbreath)
Wow that was hard to be nice to her.. Because I hate her sooo much!!!

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    MS GREY (talk_greet_neutral)
See you later darling, you will be called soon

@MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy

@MS GREY faces left
@transition fade out black 3

INT. CASTLE BALLROOM - NIGHT with MICROPHONE with BLUETABLE

if (Yes_Okay) {

}

@MS GREY changes into MS_GREY_PARTY_RED
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA changes into JULIUS_MOM_DEWIKA_SEXY
@CINDY changes into CINDY_MINT

@cut to zone 3
@overlay BLUETABLE moves to layer 9

@overlay BLUETABLE shifts to -4 131 in zone 3
@overlay BLUETABLE scales to 0.662 0.662 in zone 3

@overlay MICROPHONE shifts to -18 1 in zone 2
@overlay MICROPHONE scales to 1.119 1.119 in zone 2

@MS GREY moves to layer 1
@overlay BLUETABLE moves to layer 2

@MS GREY spot 0.700 240 315
@MS GREY faces left

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA spot 0.652 179 343
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@TONY spot 0.769 101 307
@TONY faces left

@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0
@transition fade in black 3

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Welcome to the casting song audition

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I'm the director of that audition

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
To my left site is the vice director of this audition and also my best friend

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is bow_happy
@zoom reset

@zoom on 929 382 to 305% in 0

@MS GREY is idle_happy_loop

    MS GREY (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Thanks Dewii

@zoom reset

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left
@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
And to my right is the very talented tony, he is a music teacher and also a model

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is flirt_shy
@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 0

    TONY (talk_greet_shy)
Hello ladies

    TONY (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm happy to hear your all beautiful voices

    TONY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
And don't be nervous, just show us what you got and with a little bit of luck you will become a famous singer soon

@TONY is flirt_wink_happy
@zoom reset
@SHANNON spot 1.170 238 94 in zone 2
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON is flirt_wink_happy
@YOU spot 1.012 132 133 in zone 2
@YOU faces right
@YOU is dance_groove_happy_loop
@CINDY spot 1.088 70 110 in zone 2
@CINDY faces right
@CINDY is admire_happy
@pan to zone 2

    CINDY (talk_gossip)
He is hot!

@CINDY is blush_shy
@YOU is laugh_giggle
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 1
@CRYSTAL spot 1.280 182 32
@CRYSTAL faces right
@MIMI spot 1.246 64 8
@MIMI faces right
MIMI (flirt_coy)
(Be the father of my future children)

@CRYSTAL is primp_neutral
@CRYSTAL faces left

    CRYSTAL (talk_gossip)
Did you saw the girl with yellowish hair

@CRYSTAL is laugh_crackup
@MIMI is laugh_chuckle

    CRYSTAL (talk_apathetic)
Why everyone wants to be blonde, blondes are so dumb

@MIMI is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    CRYSTAL (talk_repulsed)
I mean other blondes..you are super smart

@MIMI is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    CRYSTAL (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
My bestiee..

    MIMI (talk_doubtful)
Whatever!

@pan to zone 3

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armsraised_neutral)
So let's start with the beautiful Shannon

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is primp_neutral

@CINDY walks to spot 0.703 39 301
@CINDY faces right
@YOU walks to spot 0.708 122 286
@YOU faces right

@YOU is idle_happy_loop
@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I will sing the song call me maybe from Carly Rae Jepsen

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

    CINDY (idle_armscrossed_angry_loop)
(Really? did she really gaved him a blow kiss)

    CINDY (eyeroll_subtle)
(What a Bit**)

@pan to zone 3

@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 0

    TONY (talk_holdfist_happy_loop)
Show me what you got girl!

@TONY is flirt_wink_happy
@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is primp_neutral

@zoom on 326 388 to 235% in 0

@CINDY is yawn_bored
@pause for a beat
@YOU faces left

    YOU (talk_apathetic)
Oh Good Night

@CINDY is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop

@YOU is laugh_chuckle

    CINDY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Um you heard me yawning

@pause for a beat

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_excited_happy)
Even the people in Asia have heard you yawning

@YOU is laugh_crackup
@CINDY is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@YOU faces right

@zoom reset

    SHANNON (sing_warmup_loop)
I threw a wish in the well
Don't ask me I'll never tell
I looked at you as it fell
And now you're in my way
I trade my soul for a wish
Pennies and dimes for a kiss
I wasn't looking for this
But now you're in my way

@cut to zone 3

@SHANNON moves to layer 2
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.963 48 200 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop

@MS GREY faces left
@MS GREY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_happy_loop
@TONY is flirt_shy
@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@TONY is blush_shy

@SHANNON walks to spot 0.963 251 163 in zone 3 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop
@SHANNON faces left

@TONY faces right AND TONY is think_rubchin
@MS GREY faces right AND MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right AND JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is dance_shake_happy_loop

    SHANNON (sing_warmup_loop)
Your stare was holding
Ripped jeans
Skin was showing
Hot night
Wind was blowing

@SHANNON walks to spot 0.880 166 234 in zone 3 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop
@TONY is blush_shy
SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
Where you think you’re going baby?

@MS GREY faces left AND JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@TONY is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON spot 0.880 129 243
@SHANNON faces right AND SHANNON is kiss_passionate_loop_rear
@pause for a beat
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is react_holdface_happy
@MS GREY is react_startled_surprised
@pause for a beat
@MS GREY is think_rubchin
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is listen_nod_happy_loop

@YOU faces right
@CINDY spot 0.703 61 173 in zone 2
@CINDY is sleep_sit_neutral_loop
@YOU is admire_happy
@pan to zone 2

@YOU spot 0.708 190 276
@YOU faces left
@YOU is admire_happy
@YOU is eyeroll_sarcastic
@pause for a beat
@YOU is laugh_crackup
@YOU faces right

@pan to zone 1

    MIMI (talk_flirt_charming)
Oh how romantic this is

@CRYSTAL faces left
@CRYSTAL is vomit_bendover
@pause for a beat
MIMI (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
I guess you don’t like it

    CRYSTAL (talk_sarcastic)
Non, no I like it sooo much

@CRYSTAL is vomit_bendover
@MIMI is eyeroll_sarcastic
@MIMI is laugh_giggle
@CRYSTAL is laugh_giggle

@cut to zone 3

@TONY is deepbreath

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON spot 0.787 156 318

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
Hey I just met you, and this is crazy

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
But here's my number, so call me maybe

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
It's hard to look right at you baby, but here's my number, so call me maybe

@SHANNON is standup_neutral
@SHANNON spot 0.848 207 238

@add Sheet Paper White to SHANNON
@pause for a beat
@remove Sheet Paper White from SHANNON

@TONY is pickup_paper_neutral
@add Sheet Paper White to TONY
@pause for a beat

@TONY is read_paper_neutral
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.999 276 145

@MS GREY faces right
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@MS GREY is applaud_happy_loop
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is applaud_happy_loop
@remove Sheet Paper White from TONY
@TONY is applaud_happy_loop

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 2
@YOU moves to layer 1
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.165 241 88 in zone 2
@YOU walks to spot 1.011 100 143 in zone 2 AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@YOU faces right

@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
YOU (talk_excited_happy)
Wow you was amazing!!!

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I know sweety, i was more than amazing

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Yeahh

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@YOU is flirt_shy

@TONY faces left
@MS GREY faces left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0

@TONY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@MS GREY is think_rubchin

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
So next is [FIRST_NAME]

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
My favorite is Shannon but try your best

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@SHANNON is primp_neutral

    SHANNON (talk_agree_happy)
Don't be nervous Sweety

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I know I'm the best singer

    SHANNON (talk_explain_neutral)
But you will also sing well, i will give you a kiss for good luck

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON moves to layer 0
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.805 38 225 AND SHANNON faces right

@YOU walks to spot 1.011 198 122 AND YOU does it while walk_worried_loop

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
@MS GREY is react_claphands_happy

    MS GREY (talk_pointup_happy)
Darling! sing your song

@pan to zone 2

@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic

@zoom on 577 425 to 207% in 0
@YOU is deepbreath
sound heartbeat
@pause for a beat
sound heartbeat

@zoom reset

    SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Sweety you can do it!!

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 1.5
@TONY is idle_armscrossed_angry_pose
@pause for a beat

    TONY (talk_apathetic)
Will you sing now or will we have to wait until next christmas?

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 577 425 to 207% in 0
@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Hello It's me

    YOU (talk_sad)
I was wondering if after all these years, You'd like to meet, to go over everything

@YOU is idle_sad_loop
@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (talk_sad_timid_loop)
They say that time's supposed to heal ya, but I ain't done much healing

@YOU is deepbreath

    SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Sweety don't stop, you are amazing girl!

@pause for a beat

@zoom reset
@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

    YOU (talk_sad)
Hello can you hear me? I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be. When we were younger and free

    YOU (talk_sad)
I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet

    YOU (talk_sad)
There's such a difference between us and a million miles


    YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
Hello from the other side!!!

@pause for a beat

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy

@CINDY is standup_neutral
@CINDY spot 0.740 100 242

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy
@pause for a beat

@TONY is react_startled_subtle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@MS GREY is flirt_coy

@pan to zone 3
TONY (react_startled_subtle)
(damm girl, what a fucking amazing voice)

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_jawdrop_awe_loop)
O-M-G !!!!!

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_jawdrop_awe_loop)
I can't believe this, I have goose bumps

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_shiver_cold_loop
@pause for a beat

    MS GREY (flirt_coy)
My Darling... I know it from the beginning that you have a very beautiful voice

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy
@CINDY is react_claphands_happy
@pan to zone 3

@TONY is react_claphands_happy
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is react_claphands_happy
@MS GREY is react_claphands_happy

@pan to zone 1
@MIMI is react_claphands_happy
@CRYSTAL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    CRYSTAL (talk_primp_neutral)
I can do it better, much much better

@MIMI is eyeroll_sarcastic

@cut to zone 3

@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0
JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_sad_exhausted)
Next is Cindy…

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_sad_exhausted)
I'm curious what surprise we get involved next

@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CINDY is listen_nod_happy_loop

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2

@YOU faces left
@YOU walks to spot 0.699 140 265
YOU (talk_neutral_loop)
Good Luck

    CINDY (talk_agree_happy)
Thanks

    SHANNON (talk_apathetic)
Of course she needs luck

@YOU is idle_exhausted_loop

@CINDY faces left
@zoom on 320 361 to 183% in 0

    CINDY (talk_angry)
What's your f.... problem ??!!

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I don't have any problem

    NARRATOR
Should Cindy say something or don't create drama and say nothing ?

choice
"Say something"{

    CINDY (talk_accuse_angry)
Listen, why do you annoy me without reason, if you have a problem then do not leave it to others

@YOU is idle_sad_loop
SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I told already I don’t have any problem

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_apathetic)
And please shut your mouth, it stinks from your mouth

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@CINDY is react_shocked_gasp

    CINDY (talk_argument_angry)
I want to punch you in your face to beat out your arrogance

@YOU is react_gasp_dismayed

@CINDY is react_angry_shakefists
@SHANNON is react_startled_surprised
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset

@ALEX enters from left to screen center
@ALEX moves to layer 7

    ALEX (talk_exhausted)
Sorry that I'm late, I just came back from England

@ALEX is deepbreath

}
“Say nothing”{

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic
@SHANNON is primp_neutral
@zoom reset
@ALEX enters from left to screen center
@ALEX moves to layer 7

    ALEX (talk_exhausted)
Sorry that I'm late, I just came back from England

@ALEX is deepbreath

}

goto label end_chapter

INT. PINK BEDROOM - NIGHT
@MONIKA enters from left to screen center
@MONIKA is flirt_wink_atcamera

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
I hope you liked the story, it is very difficult with choices but i will still trying to make it excited and fun for you

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
And what you think will happen next? Will Shannon and Cindy fight?

@pause for a beat
sound cat_reowr

@MONIKA is react_startled_surprised_pose
@MONIKA is sigh_disappointed
@pause for a beat

    MONIKA (talk_confused_mindblown)
Not again, I can't even talk to you in peace!

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Have to go and enjoy my story

@pause for a beat

sound cat_reowr
@MONIKA is sigh_disappointed

    MONIKA (talk_greet_shy)
Bye!

@MONIKA is kiss_blow_happy

@MONIKA spot 1.280 160 0
@MONIKA exits right in 0.4 AND MONIKA does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@transition fade out black 3

label No_Thanks

@MS GREY changes into MS_GREY_PARTY_RED

@MS GREY spot 1.158 70 95
@MS GREY faces right
@YOU spot 1.060 254 110

    MS GREY (talk_doubtful)
Okay but just a haircut!, we don't have much time! hurry!!

@MS GREY is idle_argument_angry_loop

@YOU is eyeroll_subtle

    YOU (talk_unsure)
Fine..

@MS GREY exits right
@YOU exits right

@MS GREY spot 1.158 70 95
@MS GREY faces right
@YOU spot 1.060 254 110

@YOU changes hair into Short Wavy Ombre
@YOU changes hairColor into Black Dark

    MS GREY (talk_flirt_coy)
Let's go Darling to your new Life!

@MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy
@YOU is idle_bounce_happy_loop

@YOU exits right AND MS GREY exits right

INT. COLOSSEUM CONCERT - NIGHT

if (No_Thanks) {

}

@MS GREY changes into MS_GREY_PARTY_RED

@zoom reset

@cut to zone 2

@YOU walks to spot 1.069 188 100
@MS GREY walks to spot 1.146 68 88

    YOU (talk_sarcastic)
Oh yeah we are late

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle

    MS GREY (talk_unsure)
We are the first ones please behave like a lady

@MS GREY is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@YOU is eyeroll_subtle

@cut to zone 3
@YOU walks to spot 1.069 188 100
@MS GREY walks to spot 1.146 68 88

    MS GREY (talk_think_neutral)
So darling I see where the casting director is and you look around here, maybe you find a new friend or a rich boyfriend

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle

@YOU faces left

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle
@MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy

@MS GREY exits left

@YOU walks to spot 0.827 196 187
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@YOU is think_rubchin
@pause for a beat

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(What should I sing?)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(Maybe hello- from Adele)

@pause for a beat

    YOU (idle_happy_loop)
(Because of this song she bring me here)

    YOU (listen_nod_happy_loop)
(Yup I will sing this song)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(This song might bring me luck..)

@pause for a beat

@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (idle_sad_loop)
(I wish my Boyfriend was here)

    YOU (flirt_coy)
(He would sing his favourite song from Bruno Mars - uptown funk)

@YOU is laugh_giggle
@zoom reset
@YOU is search_neutral
@YOU faces left
@YOU is search_neutral
@YOU faces right

    YOU (idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop)
Nobody is watching.. so

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh doh, doh doh doh

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@zoom reset
@pause for a beat

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh doh, doh doh doh

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@pause for a beat

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
Doh doh
Aaaaaow!

@zoom reset

    YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
This shit, that ice cold
Michelle Pfeiffer, that white gold
This one, for them hood girls
Them good girls, straight masterpieces.
Stylin', while in
Livin' it up in the city
Got Chucks on with Saint Laurent
Gotta kiss myself, I'm so pretty

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@YOU is kiss_smooch
@YOU is laugh_giggle

@zoom reset

    YOU (dance_club_happy_loop)
I'm too hot (hot damn)
Called a police and a fireman
I'm too hot (hot damn)
Make a dragon wanna retire, man

@zoom on 873 234 to 194% in 1.5
@pause for a beat

@YOU faces left
YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
Girls hit your hallelujah (wooh)
Girls hit your hallelujah (wooh)
‘Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you (wooh)

@zoom reset
YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
‘Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you
’Cause Uptown Funk gon’ give it to you
Saturday night, and we in the spot
Don’t believe me, just watch, come on!

@YOU is dance_club_happy_loop
@pause for a beat
@CINDY changes into CINDY_default

@CINDY walks to spot 1.058 100 94 AND CINDY does it while run_cry_embarrassed_loop
sound footsteps_fast
@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop
sound sob_female

@YOU is react_gasp_dismayed

    YOU (idle_sad_loop)
(Oh no.. I made someone cry because of my singing)

    YOU (think_rubchin)
(But why her clothes are dirty?)

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop
sound sob_female

@YOU is eyeroll_subtle

@YOU walks to spot 0.959 230 142 AND YOU does it while walk_worried_loop
@YOU faces left

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop

    YOU (callout_neutral)
Excuse me...

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Umm..

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Can I help you?

    YOU (talk_unsure)
What happened?

    CINDY (talk_sad_exhausted)
I was eating a hot dog with ketchup and while that a girl came and pushed me and my hot dog fell on my clothes

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop

    CINDY (talk_sad_exhausted)
The ketchup just squirts out of the hot dog .. so so much ketchup

@YOU is think_rubchin

    YOU (talk_armsraised_neutral)
Maybe next time you don't put ketchup in your hot dog

@YOU is laugh_chuckle

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    YOU (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I'm sorry that this happened to you

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

    YOU (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Did this girl even apologize to you?

    CINDY (talk_sad_serious_loop)
No ...

@pause for a beat

    CINDY (talk_argue_defensive)
She said... Oops the next time you must watch out

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@CINDY is idle_sad_serious_loop

    YOU (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
What a B*tch

    CINDY (talk_sad)
I don't know what should I do now, today is the last chance to take a part in this audition

@CINDY is cry_sob_sad_loop

@YOU is think_rubchin

    YOU (talk_exhausted)
Wait here, I'll come back in some minutes

@YOU exits right AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
sound running_heels

@CINDY is idle_sad_timid_loop

@pause for a beat
@CINDY moves to layer 1
@CINDY spot 1.058 103 -47
@CINDY is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop
@CINDY moves to layer 1

@SHANNON enters from right to screen right
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.846 155 192
@SHANNON moves to layer 0
@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic
sound phone_ring2
@SHANNON is read_phone_neutral_loop

    SHANNON (talk_phone_surprised_happy_loop)
Oh hey Babe, I have a good feeling, I'm under the ten best

    SHANNON (talk_phone_excited_loop)
The casting director likes me already, she said i have a good taste of style and she just need to hear me singing in some minute and i will be under the 10 best

    SHANNON (talk_phone_neutral_loop)
And there is a girl, she was eating a hot dog and the hot dog fell all over her clothes, ketchup style you know

@SHANNON is laugh_crackup

@CINDY is standup_neutral

    CINDY (idle_terrified_loop)
(How can she say such a lie about me? Why would i like to push someone!)

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_awkward_loop

@SHANNON is listen_nod_happy_loop

@SHANNON is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON is listen_phone_excited_loop

@CINDY faces left
@CINDY is idle_sad_loop
@follow CINDY to screen center in zone 1 AND CINDY does it while run_cry_embarrassed_loop
sound running_heels

    CINDY (cry_sniff_sad_loop)
Why these bad things always happen to me?

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON is read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat

@YOU spot 1.076 239 132

@YOU enters from right to screen right AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@YOU walks to spot 1.076 239 132
@pause for a beat
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON is react_gasp_dismayed
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.169 81 109 AND SHANNON does it while walk_worried_loop
@SHANNON faces right
SHANNON (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Are you ok sweety ??
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Can you hear me sweet?
@YOU is idle_wounded_sad_loop
@YOU is faint
@YOU spot 1.060 352 111
@SHANNON is react_scream_horror
sound scream_female

@pan to zone 1
@follow CINDY to screen left in zone 2 AND CINDY does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
sound running_heels

@CINDY walks to spot 1.054 237 150
@CINDY faces left
@CINDY is react_shocked_gasp
@CINDY walks to spot 1.047 250 130 AND CINDY faces left
CINDY (talk_fight_angry_loop)
What did you done to her, you monster!!
@CINDY moves to layer 0
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic
SHANNON (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Nothing! She was running at here and suddenly faint

    CINDY (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I'm sorry...

@CINDY is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    SHANNON (talk_sarcastic)
Whatever..

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

@CINDY is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    SHANNON (talk_doubtful)
Now go get her something to drink

    CINDY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Oh okay..

    SHANNON (talk_complain_angry)
Do something useful only once, goooo!!!!

@CINDY moves to layer 0

@CINDY faces left
@CINDY exits left AND CINDY does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON spot 1.103 122 -51
@SHANNON is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop

@YOU is sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken
@YOU spot 1.060 387 123

    SHANNON (talk_sit_legsup_neutral_loop)
Ohh sweety how do you feel, are you ok?

@SHANNON is standup_neutral
@SHANNON spot 1.169 157 105

    SHANNON (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
It will be all fine, the dirty girl will bring you something to drink

    YOU (sleep_lay_uncomfortable_awaken)
Dirty girl?...


    SHANNON (talk_exhausted)
Where is that weirdo?!!

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@add Cup Plastic Blue to CINDY

@CINDY moves to layer 0
@CINDY enters from left to screen left
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.169 253 96 AND SHANNON faces left

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Where you took so long!?

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

    SHANNON (talk_accuse_angry)
Don't roll your eyes on me

@YOU is standup_neutral
@YOU spot 1.013 152 141

@CINDY is react_claphands_happy
@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CINDY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
How are you feeling?

    SHANNON (talk_pointup_pretentious)
Give her the f.... water!!!

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
I have got water for you, you will feel better after drinking it

    YOU (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Thanks

@remove Cup Plastic Blue from CINDY

@add Cup Plastic Blue to YOU

@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat
@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop

    NARRATOR
Shannon, Shannon come in the roon 128 please

@YOU faces right

    SHANNON (talk_excited_happy)
Yes! It's my turn

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy

@YOU is listen_nod_happy_loop

    SHANNON (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Good luck sweety

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

@YOU is idle_happy_loop

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Thank you

@YOU faces left

    SHANNON (talk_doubtful)
And you... don't make her dirty

@SHANNON exits left

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

    CINDY (talk_think_neutral)
Are you feeling better

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Yes thanks for the water

@YOU is sip_cup_neutral_loop

@CINDY is idle_happy_loop

@remove Cup Plastic Blue from YOU

    YOU (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
So is this the girl who was pushed you ?

    CINDY (talk_angry)
Yes

@YOU is think_rubchin

@CINDY walks to spot 1.089 71 126
@YOU walks to spot 1.013 254 135 AND YOU faces left

    CINDY (talk_sad_serious_loop)
She is very nice to you, but why she can't be to me nice too

    YOU (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
Don't worry about this, I'm nice to you

    YOU (talk_think_neutral)
But the way I have got something for you, for change clothes

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
You are the best!

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
Come lets change

@CINDY is listen_nod_happy_loop

@YOU exits right
@CINDY exits right

@CINDY changes into CINDY_MINT

@YOU enters from right to screen left and YOU faces right
@YOU walks to spot 1.035 64 130
@YOU faces right

@pause for a beat

@CINDY enters from right to screen center
@CINDY walks to spot 1.096 170 128 AND CINDY does it while walk_runway_loop
@CINDY faces left

@zoom on 505 442 to 315% in 0
@CINDY is primp_neutral

@CINDY is laugh_giggle

@zoom reset

@YOU is flirt_shy

    YOU (talk_excited_happy)
You look gorgeous!!

    CINDY (talk_primp_neutral)
I know in the bathroom are mirrors

@CINDY is laugh_giggle
@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_pointup_happy)
A positive attitude!

    YOU (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
I like that

@CINDY is kiss_blow_happy

@pan to zone 1
@MS GREY enters from left to screen center

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA changes into JULIUS_MOM_DEWIKA_SEXY
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA enters from left to screen left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA walks to spot 1.183 79 111
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is read_phone_neutral_loop
@pause for a beat

    MS GREY (callout_neutral)
Darling!! come right here I want to introduce you the casting director and also my best friend since we were 16 years old

@MS GREY is laugh_giggle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is laugh_giggle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is read_phone_neutral_loop

@pan to zone 2

@YOU faces left

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy
@YOU faces right
@YOU is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@YOU is think_rubchin

@CINDY is react_shocked_awe

    CINDY (talk_excited_happy)
She just calls you Darling, do you know her?

    YOU (talk_unsure)
I think we are something like friends..

    YOU (talk_shrug_concerned)
Why?

@CINDY is laugh_crackup

@YOU is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

@CINDY is laugh_crackup

    CINDY (talk_sarcastic)
Oh nothing, she is just part of the jury and will rate us

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat

@CINDY is laugh_giggle

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop

    CINDY (talk_unsure)
Hello ?

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

@YOU is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop

@CINDY is idle_box_carry_neutral_loop

@YOU spot 1.035 113 132
@YOU moves to layer 1
@CINDY moves to layer 0

@YOU faces left

@YOU spot 1.035 61 134
@CINDY spot 1.096 139 130
@pause for a beat

@YOU spot 1.035 -14 127

@CINDY spot 1.096 69 122
@YOU spot 1.035 -27 126

@pan to zone 1

@pan to zone 2
@CINDY is idle_happy_loop

    CINDY (talk_greet_neutral)
Bye my Boo

@pan to zone 1

    MS GREY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
This is my girl

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (think_rubchin)
(I think I know her...)

@MS GREY is idle_happy_pose

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Oh no this is the Bhoot *Ghost* ... which my Beta *Son* hanging out with


    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (think_rubchin)
I must behave professional, I'm the casting director

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_greet_neutral)
Hello dear, welcome...

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (cough)
... not welcome

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    YOU (talk_greet_shy)
Hello... BiT**

@YOU is cough

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (deepbreath)
Wow that was hard to be nice to her.. Because I hate her sooo much!!!

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    MS GREY (talk_greet_neutral)
See you later darling, you will be called soon

@MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy

@MS GREY faces left
@transition fade out black 3

INT. CASTLE BALLROOM - NIGHT with MICROPHONE with BLUETABLE

if (No_Thanks) {

}

@MS GREY changes into MS_GREY_PARTY_RED
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA changes into JULIUS_MOM_DEWIKA_SEXY
@CINDY changes into CINDY_MINT

@cut to zone 3
@overlay BLUETABLE moves to layer 9

@overlay BLUETABLE shifts to -4 131 in zone 3
@overlay BLUETABLE scales to 0.662 0.662 in zone 3

@overlay MICROPHONE shifts to -18 1 in zone 2
@overlay MICROPHONE scales to 1.119 1.119 in zone 2

@MS GREY moves to layer 1
@overlay BLUETABLE moves to layer 2

@MS GREY spot 0.700 240 315
@MS GREY faces left

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA spot 0.652 179 343
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@TONY spot 0.769 101 307
@TONY faces left

@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0
@transition fade in black 3

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
Welcome to the casting song audition

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I'm the director of that audition

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
To my left site is the vice director of this audition and also my best friend

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is bow_happy
@zoom reset

@zoom on 929 382 to 305% in 0

@MS GREY is idle_happy_loop

    MS GREY (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Thanks Dewii

@zoom reset

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left
@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
And to my right is the very talented tony, he is a music teacher and also a model

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is flirt_shy
@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 0

    TONY (talk_greet_shy)
Hello ladies

    TONY (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm happy to hear your all beautiful voices

    TONY (talk_handsopen_happy_loop)
And don't be nervous, just show us what you got and with a little bit of luck you will become a famous singer soon

@TONY is flirt_wink_happy
@zoom reset

@SHANNON spot 1.170 238 94 in zone 2
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON is flirt_wink_happy
@YOU spot 1.012 132 133 in zone 2
@YOU faces right
@YOU is dance_groove_happy_loop
@CINDY spot 1.088 70 110 in zone 2
@CINDY faces right
@CINDY is admire_happy
@pan to zone 2
CINDY (talk_gossip)
He is hot!
@CINDY is blush_shy
@YOU is laugh_giggle
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 1
@CRYSTAL spot 1.280 182 32
@CRYSTAL faces right
@MIMI spot 1.246 64 8
@MIMI faces right
MIMI (flirt_coy)
(Be the father of my future children)

@CRYSTAL is primp_neutral
@CRYSTAL faces left

    CRYSTAL (talk_gossip)
Did you saw the girl with pink hair?

@CRYSTAL is laugh_crackup
@MIMI is laugh_chuckle

    CRYSTAL (talk_apathetic)
It looks so dumb

@MIMI is think_rubchin

@pan to zone 3

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armsraised_neutral)
So let's start with the beautiful Shannon

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is primp_neutral

@CINDY walks to spot 0.703 39 301
@CINDY faces right
@YOU walks to spot 0.708 122 286
@YOU faces right

@YOU is idle_happy_loop
@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I will sing the song call me maybe from Carly Rae Jepsen

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

    CINDY (idle_armscrossed_angry_loop)
(Really? did she really gave him a blow kiss)

    CINDY (eyeroll_subtle)
(What a Bit**)

@pan to zone 3

@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 0

    TONY (talk_holdfist_happy_loop)
Show me what you got girl!

@TONY is flirt_wink_happy
@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@SHANNON is primp_neutral

@zoom on 326 388 to 235% in 0

@CINDY is yawn_bored
@pause for a beat
@YOU faces left

    YOU (talk_apathetic)
Oh Good Night

@CINDY is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop

@YOU is laugh_chuckle

    CINDY (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
Um you heard me yawning

@pause for a beat

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_excited_happy)
Even the people in Asia have heard you yawning

@YOU is laugh_crackup
@CINDY is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@YOU faces right

@zoom reset

    SHANNON (sing_warmup_loop)
I threw a wish in the well
Don't ask me I'll never tell
I looked at you as it fell
And now you're in my way
I trade my soul for a wish
Pennies and dimes for a kiss
I wasn't looking for this
But now you're in my way

@cut to zone 3

@SHANNON moves to layer 2
@SHANNON faces right
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.963 48 200 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop

@MS GREY faces left
@MS GREY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_happy_loop
@TONY is flirt_shy
@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@TONY is blush_shy

@SHANNON walks to spot 0.963 251 163 in zone 3 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop
@SHANNON faces left

@TONY faces right AND TONY is think_rubchin
@MS GREY faces right AND MS GREY is kiss_blow_happy
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right AND JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is dance_shake_happy_loop

    SHANNON (sing_warmup_loop)
Your stare was holding
Ripped jeans
Skin was showing
Hot night
Wind was blowing

@SHANNON walks to spot 0.880 166 234 in zone 3 AND SHANNON does it while walk_runway_loop
@TONY is blush_shy
SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
Where you think you’re going baby?

@MS GREY faces left AND JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@TONY is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON spot 0.880 129 243
@SHANNON faces right AND SHANNON is kiss_passionate_loop_rear
@pause for a beat
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is react_holdface_happy
@MS GREY is react_startled_surprised
@pause for a beat
@MS GREY is think_rubchin
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is listen_nod_happy_loop

@CINDY spot 0.703 61 173 in zone 2
@CINDY is sleep_sit_neutral_loop
@pan to zone 2
@YOU faces right
@YOU is admire_happy

@YOU spot 0.708 190 276
@YOU faces left
@YOU is admire_happy
@YOU is eyeroll_sarcastic
@pause for a beat
@YOU is laugh_crackup
@YOU faces right

@pan to zone 1

    MIMI (talk_flirt_charming)
Oh how romantic this is

@CRYSTAL faces left
@CRYSTAL is vomit_bendover
@pause for a beat
MIMI (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
I guess you don’t like it

    CRYSTAL (talk_sarcastic)
Non, no I like it sooo much

@CRYSTAL is vomit_bendover
@MIMI is eyeroll_sarcastic
@MIMI is laugh_giggle
@CRYSTAL is laugh_giggle

@cut to zone 3

@TONY is deepbreath

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON spot 0.787 156 318

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
Hey I just met you, and this is crazy

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
But here's my number, so call me maybe

    SHANNON (talk_sit_reassure_happy)
It's hard to look right at you baby, but here's my number, so call me maybe

@SHANNON is standup_neutral
@SHANNON spot 0.848 207 238

@add Sheet Paper White to SHANNON
@pause for a beat
@remove Sheet Paper White from SHANNON

@TONY is pickup_paper_neutral
@add Sheet Paper White to TONY
@pause for a beat

@TONY is read_paper_neutral
@pause for a beat
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.999 276 145

@MS GREY faces right
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces right

@SHANNON faces left
@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

@MS GREY is applaud_happy_loop
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is applaud_happy_loop
@remove Sheet Paper White from TONY
@TONY is applaud_happy_loop

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 2
@YOU moves to layer 1
@SHANNON walks to spot 1.165 241 88 in zone 2
@YOU walks to spot 1.011 100 143 in zone 2 AND YOU does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@YOU faces right

@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
YOU (talk_excited_happy)
Wow you was amazing!!!

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I know sweety, i was more than amazing

@YOU is laugh_giggle

    YOU (talk_agree_happy)
Yeahh

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy
@YOU is flirt_shy

@TONY faces left
@MS GREY faces left
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA faces left

@pan to zone 3
@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0

@TONY is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
@MS GREY is think_rubchin

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
So next is [FIRST_NAME]

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_armscrossed_condescending_loop)
My favorite is Shannon but try your best

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@SHANNON is primp_neutral

    SHANNON (talk_agree_happy)
Don't be nervous Sweety

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I know I'm the best singer

    SHANNON (talk_explain_neutral)
But you will also sing well, i will give you a kiss for good luck

@SHANNON is kiss_blow_happy

@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

@SHANNON moves to layer 0
@SHANNON walks to spot 0.805 38 225 AND SHANNON faces right

@YOU walks to spot 1.011 198 122 AND YOU does it while walk_worried_loop

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop
@MS GREY is react_claphands_happy

    MS GREY (talk_pointup_happy)
Darling! sing your song

@pan to zone 2

@SHANNON is eyeroll_sarcastic

@zoom on 577 425 to 207% in 0
@YOU is deepbreath
sound heartbeat
@pause for a beat
sound heartbeat

@zoom reset

    SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Sweety you can do it!!

@SHANNON is eyeroll_subtle

@pause for a beat

@pan to zone 3

@zoom on 707 413 to 305% in 1.5
@TONY is idle_armscrossed_angry_pose
@pause for a beat

    TONY (talk_apathetic)
Will you sing now or will we have to wait until next christmas?

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2
@zoom on 577 425 to 207% in 0
@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (talk_awkward_loop)
Hello It's me

    YOU (talk_sad)
I was wondering if after all these years, You'd like to meet, to go over everything

@YOU is idle_sad_loop
@YOU is deepbreath
@pause for a beat

    YOU (talk_sad_timid_loop)
They say that time's supposed to heal ya, but I ain't done much healing

@YOU is deepbreath

    SHANNON (callout_neutral)
Sweety don't stop, you are amazing girl!

@pause for a beat

@zoom reset
@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop

    YOU (talk_sad)
Hello can you hear me? I'm in California dreaming about who we used to be. When we were younger and free

    YOU (talk_sad)
I've forgotten how it felt before the world fell at our feet

    YOU (talk_sad)
There's such a difference between us and a million miles


    YOU (sing_warmup_loop)
Hello from the other side!!!

@pause for a beat

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy

@CINDY is standup_neutral
@CINDY spot 0.740 100 242

@CINDY is react_holdface_happy
@pause for a beat

@TONY is react_startled_subtle
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_jawdrop_awe_loop
@MS GREY is flirt_coy

@pan to zone 3
TONY (react_startled_subtle)
(damm girl, what a fucking amazing voice)

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_jawdrop_awe_loop)
O-M-G !!!!!

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (idle_jawdrop_awe_loop)
I can't believe this, I have goose bumps

@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is idle_shiver_cold_loop
@pause for a beat

    MS GREY (flirt_coy)
My Darling... I know it from the beginning that you have a very beautiful voice

@YOU is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

@SHANNON is react_claphands_happy
@CINDY is react_claphands_happy
@pan to zone 3

@TONY is react_claphands_happy
@JULIUS MOM DEWIKA is react_claphands_happy
@MS GREY is react_claphands_happy

@pan to zone 1
@MIMI is react_claphands_happy
@CRYSTAL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    CRYSTAL (talk_primp_neutral)
I can do it better, much much better

@MIMI is eyeroll_sarcastic

@cut to zone 3

@zoom on 811 378 to 240% in 0
JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_sad_exhausted)
Next is Cindy…

    JULIUS MOM DEWIKA (talk_sad_exhausted)
I'm curious what surprise we get involved next

@SHANNON is idle_handsonhips_neutral_loop
@CINDY is listen_nod_happy_loop

@zoom reset

@pan to zone 2

@YOU faces left
@YOU walks to spot 0.699 140 265
YOU (talk_neutral_loop)
Good Luck

    CINDY (talk_agree_happy)
Thanks

    SHANNON (talk_apathetic)
Of course she needs luck

@CINDY faces left
@zoom on 320 361 to 183% in 0

    CINDY (talk_angry)
What's your f.... problem ??!!

    SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I don't have any problem

    NARRATOR
Should Cindy say something or don't create drama and say nothing ?

choice
"Say something"{

    CINDY (talk_accuse_angry)
Listen, why do you annoy me without reason, if you have a problem then do not leave it to others

@YOU is idle_sad_loop
SHANNON (talk_primp_neutral)
I told already I don’t have any problem

@CINDY is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    SHANNON (talk_apathetic)
And please shut your mouth, it stinks from your mouth

@SHANNON is idle_armscrossed_shifteyes_loop

@CINDY is react_shocked_gasp

    CINDY (talk_argument_angry)
I want to punch you in your face to beat out your arrogance

@YOU is react_gasp_dismayed

@CINDY is react_angry_shakefists
@SHANNON is react_startled_surprised
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset

@ALEX enters from left to screen center
@ALEX moves to layer 7

    ALEX (talk_exhausted)
Sorry that I'm late, I just came back from England

@ALEX is deepbreath

}
“Say nothing”{

@CINDY is eyeroll_sarcastic
@SHANNON is primp_neutral
@zoom reset
@ALEX enters from left to screen center
@ALEX moves to layer 7

    ALEX (talk_exhausted)
Sorry that I'm late, I just came back from England

@ALEX is deepbreath

}

label end_chapter

INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
To be continued…

End of Episode 2

INT. PINK BEDROOM - NIGHT
@MONIKA enters from left to screen center
@MONIKA is flirt_wink_atcamera

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
I hope you liked the story, it is very difficult with choices but i will still trying to make it excited and fun for you

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
And what you think will happen next? Will Shannon and Cindy fight?

@pause for a beat
sound cat_reowr

@MONIKA is react_startled_surprised_pose
@MONIKA is sigh_disappointed
@pause for a beat

    MONIKA (talk_confused_mindblown)
Not again, I can't even talk to you in peace!

    MONIKA (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Have to go and enjoy my story

@pause for a beat

sound cat_reowr
@MONIKA is sigh_disappointed

    MONIKA (talk_greet_shy)
Bye!

@MONIKA is kiss_blow_happy

@MONIKA spot 1.280 160 0
@MONIKA exits right in 0.4 AND MONIKA does it while run_athletic_neutral_loop
@transition fade out black 3


#6

The end with the author looks fine, is that the end of the script?


#7

yes it should be the end but after transition fade out she cames again and speaks the same thing :confused:


#8

Hmmm idk

@Purple_Ghost what’d you think?


#9

@MonikaCat,

Try getting rid of the word label in this part.
image

Let me know if that works.


#10

I tried but it didn’t work , maybe later ill try it again and copy the script in a document and delete it and start again… and i should properly watch how to make lebels and choices… I just finish my 3rd epsiode but something wrong happened becose i but also choices for readers ro decide what the characters says… but thank you guys <3


#11

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#12