Oh, ok, here, the scene is not complete at the moment, but it will be going into a scene in a bookshop that the character Maeve works at that takes place the day after this scene, here:
INT. POSH HOTEL BAR - DAY with POSH HOTEL BAR in zone 1 at layer -1
@cut to zone 1 AND zoom on 320 172 to 166% in 0
music music_nyjazz_lp
volume music 50 0
&ELIZA spot 0.543 106 312 in zone 2 AND ELIZA faces right AND ELIZA is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND ELIZA moves to layer -2 AND KELSEY spot 0.543 260 312 in zone 1 AND KELSEY faces left AND KELSEY moves to layer -2 AND CALEB spot 0.581 197 290 in zone 1 AND CALEB faces left AND CALEB is rear AND CALEB moves to layer 1 AND FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4 spot 0.596 41 248 in zone 2 AND FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4 faces right AND FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4 moves to layer 1 AND MALE HOTEL PATRON 4 spot 0.627 106 248 in zone 2 AND MALE HOTEL PATRON 4 faces left AND MALE HOTEL PATRON 4 moves to layer 1 AND JUSTIN spot 0.581 42 284 in zone 3 AND JUSTIN faces right AND JUSTIN is rear AND JUSTIN moves to layer 1 AND MAEVE spot 0.596 93 38 in zone 3 AND MAEVE faces right AND MAEVE is rear AND MAEVE moves to layer 3
@KELSEY is laugh_crackup
&pause for a beat
@pan to zone 2 in 2
@MALE HOTEL PATRON 4 is talk_explain_neutral
@MALE HOTEL PATRON 4 is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop AND FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4 is react_shocked_gasp
@FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4 is talk_excited_happy
@pan to zone 3 in 2
@MAEVE walks to spot 0.596 253 248 in zone 2 in 2 AND MAEVE faces right AND MAEVE does it while walk_neutral_rear
@MAEVE faces left AND MAEVE is stretch_pregnant_tired AND JUSTIN faces left AND JUSTIN is think_rubchin
@MAEVE is idle_exhausted_loop
&pause for a beat
@JUSTIN walks to spot 0.627 8 238 in 2 AND MAEVE is idle
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
JUSTIN (talk_neutral)
Hello again.
@MAEVE faces right AND MAEVE is react_startled_surprised
@speechbubble is 186 270 to 100% with tail_top_left
MAEVE (talk_sad_exhausted)
Oh its you.
@JUSTIN is laugh_chuckle AND MAEVE is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
JUSTIN (talk_reassure_neutral)
Sorry if I scared you.
JUSTIN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
It really wasn't my intention.
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
MAEVE (talk_think_neutral)
It's Justin isn't it?
MAEVE (talk_shrug_neutral)
What did you think of my show tonight?
&MAEVE is idle
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
JUSTIN (talk_gossip)
Your Swan Lake was lovely.
JUSTIN (talk_explain_neutral)
Reminded me of when my Gran took me to the ballet as a kid.
JUSTIN (talk_think_neutral)
I have a collection of music from some of the greats at home, would you fancy coming to my place to listen to a few records.
&JUSTIN is think_rubchin
@speechbubble reset
NARRATOR (SARAH)
How would you like to respond?
choice
“Polite put-down” {
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
readerMessage You have earned +1 | color:pink | Good | color:black | point.
@GOOD +1
MAEVE (talk_awkward_loop)
I'm sorry, I can't.
MAEVE (talk_explain_neutral)
I'm really busy is all.
&MAEVE is idle
} “Blunt response” {
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
readerMessage You have earned +1 | color:green | Bad | color:black | point.
@BAD +1
MAEVE (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I can't, my boss doesn't like us fraternising with guests.
&MAEVE is idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop
}
@speechbubble is 135 266 to 100% with tail_top_right
JUSTIN (talk_sheepish_rubneck)
It's ok, never mind.
JUSTIN (talk_greet_neutral)
See you around.
@JUSTIN walks to spot 0.627 160 238 in zone 2 in 1.5 AND ELIZA faces left AND ELIZA is idle AND KELSEY spot 0.543 55 312 in zone 2 AND KELSEY faces right AND CALEB faces right AND CALEB is think_rubchin
@remove JUSTIN
@remove FEMALE HOTEL PATRON 4
@remove MALE HOTEL PATRON 4
@MAEVE walks to spot 0.564 267 290 in zone 1 in 3 AND MAEVE faces right AND MAEVE does it while walk_neutral_rear AND pan to zone 1 in 3 AND zoom on 279 217 to 232% in 3