How to zoom to each character while they speak?

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Im having trouble with my character not using the speaking animations…

Script:

INT. PENTHOUSE
@cut to zone 2

@JORDAN moves to layer 1 AND COREY moves to layer 2
@JORDAN spot 0.722 281 169 AND JORDAN is idle_sit_legsup_neutral_loop AND COREY spot 0.680 202 237 AND COREY is idle_sit_neutral_loop AND COREY faces right

@zoom on 614 257 to 306% in 0
@JORDAN is laugh_sit_crackup AND COREY is laugh_sit_crackup
@pause for a beat

@zoom on 618 239 to 523% in 0
@speechbubble is 208 259 to 100% with tail_bottom_right
@pause for a beat

    DANIELLE (laugh_giggle)
Your so funny!

    DANIELLE (talk_exhausted)
Ugh! Now I have to go pee

    DANIELLE (talk_flirt_charming)
Be right back.

@DANIELLE exits left

http://somup.com/cqlQ3mfxWs

This is what it looks like

Errors needed to be fixed:

  1. In the beginning it shows them two and then moves to camera and then they laugh. I want it to just show them laughing.

  2. When it zooms to Jordan her mouth does not perform the talking actions

  3. It was supposed to reset the zoom and show her exiting and Corey standing up and thinking.

How do I fix this? Thank you!!