I think you need to be more specific ?
I can’t it was a suggestion from a friend that I really like the idea I mean
what is this about actually ? like story ideas
Two girls are married but Anna got pregnant somehow (and without cheating) and a week went by before they made up
so u want to make dialogue from when they broke up to when they made up ?
They never broke up, Eli was just distant. But this is the makeup.
okay so you want the dialogue for the make up part in the relationship ?
Yeah
ok sure I think I can help with that
so i did a thing like that in my story but I can’t really explain it with words because it doesn’t come out as fluid as I’m thinking it so here’s the link
(i haven’t written much yet)
maybe you can do something like the scene in which my character talks about dating?
if u want I can pm you so that maybe I can come up with the dialogue
i mean, for your gf seeing anna everyday
Sure!!
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