do you mean dialogue? You can use narrator’s of the perspective of the girl laying there or the person watching her
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Is it the main character or some other in the bed?
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It’s from the same story you were helping me with writing an art scene for.
The MC
And here I was.
In the bed, unconscious
But conscious enough to know, it might be the end.
Doctors have been giving me Anesthesia but little do they know how to prevent the pain of fearing to die.
HOPE YOU USE IT 
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Here’s a suggestion!
“And that’s when darkness took over.
I could see nothing but my life flashing before my eyes.
Barely moving, I sent out a silent cry of pain.
And maybe a cry of despair along with that.”
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