How's my description? Pls share your opinions 😃

Title- Effect Of Eternity

Description

Life turns complicated when Abigail embarks on a life changing journey to save her sister, Nora. Little did she know that a adventure full of magical secrets await her

Let me know ur thoughts pls :pleading_face::blush:

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Sounds interesting! Based off the description, I’d give it a read.

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Thanks…It means a lot :smiley:

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According to my Opinion, I love it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Because I don’t really like to read a very long description :blush: I will surely give it a try :grin:

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Thanks dear :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Description is small and cute and gives what story is about… definitely would give it a try

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It’s great! :boom:But maybe it can worded a bit different…

Abigail’s world is flipped upside down when she embarks on a life changing journey to save her sister, Nora. Little does she know that an adventure full of magical secrets awaits her.

(Just a suggestion)

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I like it. I think it’s a very good description. As it has a nice hook to it. I also like how it explicitly shows their magic/ fantasy.

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Ty @Goldpigs and @Akanksha.writes :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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Ty for ur suggestion…I really like it :two_hearts:

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