I am think of writing a story called “Father, you’re dead!” And I am still deciding which style to write it in. Limelight or Ink, what style do you think I should write this story in? Then can you give me male character ideas/suggestions. Please

I will change their outfits to suit their age then I will make Mum!

Oh, thanks! I just thought of the murder part 5 minutes ago!

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Just a side note, do you know how to fade a character, make them look ghost like?

Yes! I just found that yesterday!

There is a thread about it!

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That’s the thread, so ghost and middle of the scene.

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I know, I was just wondering if you did, all good. So when do the girls have their parents talk to them, is it during sleep time or just through out the day?

Both. I think. What do you think?

It can start during the night, that way it sets the scene and then extra info regarding the murder can just pop up during the day. I have already made their pajamas, now because of their age, they be at school, so do you want school uniforms or no uniform?

So there info can happen when the girls are at school when they are in class. Yes, one outfit with chool uniforms and one without would be good. Because in the middle of the year the school cancels school uniforms.

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Ok great well I will get to it then.

Do you need anything else? For the story?

Laura

Pajamas

Cami Basiccotton Neutral White
Sweat Pants Ties Blue Oxford Bottoms

School Uniform

Kneehigh Socks Mary Janes Leather Red Praline
Collared Bow Tie Shirt Tucked Cotton Red Rose
Pleated School Skirt White Trim Cotton Grey Black
Strapped Accented Watch Face Pink Peach
Backpack Quilt Stitched Open Top Leather Red Rose

Casual

Denim Blue Side Stitched Jeans
Strapped Accented Watch Face Pink Peach
Backpack Quilt Stitched Open Top Leather Red Rose
Rolled Sleeve Short Vneck Shirt Cotton Grey White Eyes
Multi Strap Double Buckle Sandal Leather Neutral Brown

Only if there are any more important characters.

What should the MC’s name be do you think?

Not sure, may I ask why one of the sisters is a MC for your story, does she have a back story or a future story? I may have missed it if you explained earlier. Also if you are unsure you can leave that for the reader to decide, like do a name input into the script.

The sister is like a second MC. The story will be in both perspectives. But mostly only the MCs perspective.

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The sister might have a future story.

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Joanne

Pajamas

Cami Basiccotton Pink Coral
Freckles Heavy (08-10)
Holiday Candy Cane Pajama Bottoms Cotton Red White

School Uniform

Freckles (08-10)
Kneehigh Socks Mary Janes Leather Red Praline
Sweater Vest Striped Collared Tie Shirt Cotton Red Rose
Pleated School Skirt White Trim Cotton Grey Black
Strapped Accented Watch Face Pink Peach
Backpack Quilt Stitched Open Top Leather Red Rose

Casual

Strapped Accented Watch Face Pink Peach
Backpack Quilt Stitched Open Top Leather Red Rose
Netted Collar Dress Small Belted Floral Short Dress Cotton Purple Orchid
Flat Canvas Sneakers Cotton Black White
Freckles Heavy (08-10)