I am VERY confused and im 'bouta cry


#1

this is the warning:

unexpected block end: did you forget the { which goes with this }, or forget to put the word “choice” at the start of this choice option?

Ummmmmmmmmmm NO I DID NOT.

this is my script:

INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY

@cut to zone 2

@JOSEPH enters from right to spot 1.010 152 235

    JOSEPH (talk_greet_neutral)
Hi, I'm Joseph Green.

    JOSEPH (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I'll be auditioning for Jamie.

    NARRATOR (DIRECTOR)
Whenever you're ready.

    JOSEPH 
(The first line?)

choice
“My feelings for you grow stronger everyday.” {

gain one_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you grow stronger everyday.

choice
“I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} “I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you.” {

gain two_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, loved someone as much as you.

} “I love you so much.” {

gain three_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.

} “I love you.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.

}

} “My feelings for you are like no other.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you are like no other.

“I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} “I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you.” {

gain one_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never been in my life, loved someone as much as you.

} “I love you so much.” {

gain two_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.

} “I love you.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.

}
}

basically i want it where if Joseph gets the first line wrong (“My feelings for you grow stronger everyday.”) then he goes into this branch

Summary

{

gain one_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you grow stronger everyday.

choice
“I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} “I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you.” {

gain two_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, loved someone as much as you.

} “I love you so much.” {

gain three_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.

} “I love you.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.

}

}

but if he gets the first line correct, he goes into this branch

Summary

“My feelings for you are like no other.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you are like no other.

“I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} “I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you.” {

gain one_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never been in my life, loved someone as much as you.

} “I love you so much.” {

gain two_wrong

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.

} “I love you.” {

    JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.

}
}


#2

what am i doing wrong?


#3

I think I might have spotted it


#4

what’s wrong with it?


#5

I added a bracket and made it bold so you can see where to add it


#6

I agree, I think that’s the issue :wink:


#7

that’s not it. i want all of this

Summary

“My feelings for you are like no other.” {

JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)

My feelings for you are like no other.
“I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.” {

JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)

I’ve never in my life, felt like this before.
} “I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you.” {

gain one_wrong

JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)

I’ve never been in my life, loved someone as much as you.
} “I love you so much.” {

gain two_wrong

JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)

I love you so much.
} “I love you.” {

JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)

I love you.
}
}

inside this choice
“My feelings for you are like no other.”


#8

and when i add this } it makes multiple choices when there should only be two


#9

You forgot to put the word choice in front of one of your choices


#10

which?


#11

Or you put an extra }

}- try removing this

} “My feelings for you are like no other.” {


#12

You’ve forgotten another bracket. I put it in bold so you can see it better :wink:


#13

Oh right, gotcha. Then I believe you would need the word choice right before “My feelings for you are like no other”


#14

What line is the error on?


#15

Here’s the whole thing. I’ve bolded the things I added


#16

i’ve given up, y’all.
it’s way more complicated than i thought it was


#17

@Apes do you thank you could help with this?


#18

it’s okay, i’ve given up lol

@Jeremy or @Sydney_H can you close this thread please? :slight_smile:


#19

Never give up…


#20

Even if it takes a month you’ll feel good when you solve it.:+1:t5: