I am VERY confused and im 'bouta cry

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INT. AUDITION STAGE - DAY

@cut to zone 2

@JOSEPH enters from right to spot 1.010 152 235

JOSEPH (talk_greet_neutral)
Hi, I'm JOSEPH Green.

JOSEPH (talk_handsonhips_neutral)
I'll be auditioning for Jamie.

NARRATOR (DIRECTOR)
Whenever you're ready.

JOSEPH 
(The first line?)
choice
"My feelings for you grow stronger everyday." {
gain one_wrong

JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you grow stronger everyday.
choice
"I’ve never in my life, felt like this before." {
JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} "I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you." {
gain two_wrong

JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, loved someone as much as you.
choice
"I love you so much." {
gain three_wrong
JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.
} "I love you." {
JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.
}}


} "My feelings for you are like no other." {
JOSEPH (talk_flirt_charming)
My feelings for you are like no other.
choice
"I’ve never in my life, felt like this before." {
JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never in my life, felt like this before.

} "I’ve never in my life, loved someone as much as you." {
gain one_wrong
JOSEPH (talk_flirt_coy)
I've never been in my life, loved someone as much as you.
choice
"I love you so much." {
gain two_wrong
JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you so much.

} "I love you." {

JOSEPH (talk_sad_timid_loop)
I love you.
}}}
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Dara to the rescue! :grinning: @AnonymousAuthor1 now you have hope :relieved:

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You’re going to have to work with flags and labels for this one. Right now, you have a choice within a choice and that can work in some cases but it’s definitely not to achieve what you want to achieve with your script. Apart from that, I spotted some minor errors too (like the bracket you forgot - some people already pointed that out) and I’m not sure but I don’t think @CHARACTER enters from screen to spot… is a valid command but this might have changed as many new features have been added over the years. I can correct your script if you want so you’d only have to copy paste it and see if it works then! However, I’m not home right now and won’t be until very late tonight. Would sometime tomorrow be okay for you? I’ll comment back on this thread when I get home :blush: