Hello! 
I would like some constructive criticism on my story. Feel free to be as harsh as you want! (I’m currently in the process of going back and fixing grammar issues, but I’m just waiting for the contest to end, so I can update it.)
Title" Magicka: Rain
Author: Avarose456
Genre: Fantasy/Action
Episodes: 3 (working on 4.)
Description: When Rain joins a team of superheroes fighting supernatural creatures, for the first time she experiences real adventure. But, remember, your actions have consequences.
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5702444050087936
Also, feel free to take as long as you need, I am in no rush.