I will read your story!
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I will finish your story today!
and I will give feedback!
I will finish your story today!
and I will give feedback!
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I will read your story!
I will read your story!
It’s a really nice story I really enjoyed it thanks for making my time perfect!!!
I give you a 10!!!
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You did a great job!!! keep going like this and hopefully you are making more nice stories!!!
I give you a 10!!!
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So nothing I should fix?
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Aw thank you
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Mine is pretty cool… I think:)
Story: Tied Together
Author: Molly
Description: Sydney has everything she has ever wanted, but what happens when her Mafia life takes it all away?
Link:
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No @babygirl171 everything is for me good I enjoyed it and it was a great story so no you should fix nothing for me!!!
No problem!!!
I will read your story!
I finished your story and your story was EXCITING!!! My face how I was reading the story was like 
AHAHAHAHAHA!!
I give you a 10!!!
But it was really brave that the girls had plans they weren’t affraid!
I finished your story too but mabye you should first ease into it not in the first chapter you already know that he is calling someone I think it’s too fast!
but the rest of the story was nice!!
I give you a 9!!!
Thank you! Looking forward to feedback!
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okay, thanks for the feedback and I appreciate you taking your time to read it!
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No problemmm!!!
No problem!!!
I finished your story! it was fine that everybody was nice to me but I just entered the school AHAHAHAHHAHA!!! YOUR.STORY.IS.REALLY.AWESOME!!!
I GIVE YOU A NICE 10!!!