I don't know what description I need to use

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So my story is about a girl who accidently traveles back in time… I don’t know what I need to put in the description, please tell me which one is better :stuck_out_tongue:

As in every episode story, things are always going different than usually. But in this story, things will be alot more unusual…

You were just a normal girl celebrating your birthday. when you accidently got hit with the fireworks your family brought you, you find yourself in a different world that usual…

I just don’t know which one I need to pick…
Or should I just write another one!?
Please tell me your opinion! :persevere:

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I think the 2 one sound better. :thinking:

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Number 2 sounds better.

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The second is good, :wink:

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2 is better because 1 is quite vague.

You were just a normal girl, celebrating your birthday. [But,] When you accidently get hit with the fireworks your family brought you, you find yourself in a different world than usual…

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2 foe sure

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