I have a coding error and I don't know how to fix it :((((

Hello to whomever is reading this! I’m not sure if I can clearly explain this in a way that everyone will easily understand, but I’m trying to create an outfit game where readers can choose the mc outfit, hair, and makeup. However, a common problem that I am finding unavoidable is that the choice are getting mixed up within other choice. For the very first choice the reader can make, I wanted the page to contain Outfit, Hair, Makeup, and Finished, however, the makeup is getting lost with in the hair choice and is showing up in a spot where it isn’t supposed to show up. I’m fairly new to advanced coding like this and want to learn myself without using a script template. Below is what my script says, if anyone could help out that’d be great!!! As well, if theres a better way that I can code or make things look better I’d love the advice! It’s quite long, sorry to whoever decided to read this LOL

ALINA (idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop)
(Alright, let’s get ready quickly so I can make it to the job on time.)
choice
“Finished!” {
@pause for 1
goto end_game
}
“Clothes” {
label clothes_game
ALINA
What outfit do I want to wear?
choice
“Outfit 1” {
@ALINA starts dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes into ALINA_professionalOutfit
@pause for 1
}
“Outfit 2” {
@ALINA starts dustoff_neutral_loop
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes into ALINA_professionalOutfit2
@pause for 1
}
@ALINA starts think_rubchin
ALINA
(Is this what I want to wear?)
choice
“Yes!” {
goto outfit_game
}
“No!” {
goto clothes_game
}
}
“Hair” {
NARRATOR
The hairstyle and hair colour you choose are limited, as it’s a vital part of Alina’s gang persona!
label hair_game
ALINA
(How do I want to do my hair?)
choice
“Hair style” {
label hair_style
ALINA
(What hair style am I feeling for today?)
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Long Curl Half Updo” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Long Curl Half Updo
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Long Updo Wavy Princess Braid” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Long Updo Wavy Princess Braid
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_game
}
“Morning Updo”{
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Morning Updo
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Pinup Victory Rolls” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Pinup Victory Rolls
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Side Swept Updo Long” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Side Swept Updo Long
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Updo” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Updo
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Updo Curly Long” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Updo Curly Long
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Updo Curly Messy” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Updo Curly Messy
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Updo High Twist Bangs Blunt” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Updo High Twist Bangs Blunt
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
“Updo Pony Wavy Long” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hair into Updo Pony Wavy Long
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_style
}
}
“Hair colour” {
NARRATOR
The hair colour you choose for Alina is limited to purple, as her persona is linked with the colour purple. Make sure you choose a colour, otherwise the next scenes won’t make sense!
label hair_colour
ALINA
(What colour hair do I want?)
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Purple Lilac”{
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hairColor into Purple Lilac
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_colour
}
“Pastel Purple Lavender” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hairColor into Pastel Purple Lavender
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_colour
}
“Purple” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hairColor into Purple
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_colour
}
“Red Purple” {
@ALINA starts primp_brushhair_happy
@pause for 1
@ALINA changes hairColor into Red Purple
@pause for 2
@ALINA primp_neutral
goto hair_colour
}
“Done” {
goto outfit_game
}}
“Makeup”{
NARRATOR
Your lipstick choices for Alina are limited to purple, as her persona is strictly known to this colour :slight_smile:
}
ALINA (think_rubchin)
(What colour lipstick do I want to wear?)
choice
“Matte Colours” {
label matte_lipstick
ALINA
(What lipstick do I want to wear?)
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Purple Deep Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Purple Deep Matte
@pause for 1
}
“Dark Mauve Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into
@pause for 1
}
“Blackberry Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Blackberry Matte
}
“Violet Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Violet Matte
@pause for 1
}
“Dark Amethyst Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Dark Amethyst Matte
@pause for 1
}
“Purple Pastel Matte” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Matte
@pause for 1
}}
label colour_choice
NARRATOR
Is this the right colour?
choice
“Yes!” {
goto outfit_game
}
“No! Take me to the glosses!” {
goto gloss_lipstick
}
“No! Take me to the mattes!”{
goto matte_lipstick
}
“Gloss Colours”{
label gloss_lipstick
ALINA (think_rubchin)
(Which lipstick would I like to wear?)
choice [shouldPaginate: YES]
“Purple Deep Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Purple Deep Gloss
@pause for 1
}
“Dark Mauve Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Dark Mauve Gloss
@pause for 1
}
“Blackberry Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Blackberry Gloss
@pause for 1
}
“Violet Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Violet Gloss
@pause for 1
}
“Dark Amethyst Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Dark Amethyst Gloss
@pause for 1
}
“Purple Pastel Gloss” {
@ALINA changes mouthColor into Purple Pastel Gloss
@pause for 1
}}
goto colour_choice
label end_game
NARRATOR
Are you sure you’re all finished? There’s | bold , animation:shuffle-sideways| no do over’s after you choose!!!
choice
“Yep, I’m all done!” {
NARRATOR
Perfect!
}
“No! Take me back!” {
NARRATOR
Aren’t you glad I added this choice?
goto outfit_game
}

Hey, I would like to help you, is your story in Limelight or is it in ink?

Thanks, I appreciate it! My story is in limelight :slight_smile:

Alright, I send you the correct form quickly :v:.

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