I have an error and needs help! (not solved but i don't need help)

Hey everyone, i am working on my story and it seems to be an error but i’ve tried everything to try to fix this. Can somebody help me? Limelight

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Your error is with your choice, click on my guide and everything is self explanatory from there

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You put brackets. Is it a choice?
If so, remember to put dialogue before your choice :slight_smile:

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and your bracets are not where they are supposed to be

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Here’s a random choice example I have:


AMY (talk_think_neutral)
Do I want to go on a date with Chad?

“Yes!” {
AMY (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
Yes, I do!

} “No.” {
AMY (talk_exclaim_no_worried)
No, I really don’t.

} “Maybe…” {
AMY (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
Maybe. I’ll consider it.
}


(I put spaces between the lines to help you recognize where the brackets go but you don’t have to.)

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and if you dont need all three options just take off everything from Maybe and below

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You put an extra bracket.

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I think you still have an extra bracet

I tried to fix it it didnt work…

try removing the bracet after “readerMessage”

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still didn’t work should i try a third option

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let me send you my template, How many choices do you need?

choice (support_author)
GEMS:5 “Yes, I would love to” {

    NARRATOR (AUTHOR)
Thank you sm!

} “No, Im sorry, but I’ll support by reading” {

    NARRATOR (AUTHOR)
No problem, thanks for reading

}

Okay so where you see “Narrator” is where what you want to happen after the choice is clicked

And where it says choice, you see how there is words and it has this “_” you need to write something like that

example:

Says_no

Something like that

If you dont need the gem, just remove it

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Hmmmm, just 2 but if i need a 3rd one ill take it

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lmk if it works

IT still didn’t work :worried:

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How about I write it for you Pm me

ill write what i have

choice
“Brianna & Harper” {

    WILLOW (react_claphands_happy)
Let me just call them and ask if they want to go.

@WILLOW starts listen_phone_happy_loop

    NARRATOR
A few minutes later

@pause for 4

@WILLOW starts talk_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 3

@WILLOW starts hangup_phone_neutral

    WILLOW (dance_armsup_hipthrust_loop)
YAY they both said they can go!!

readerMessage Rememember this choice later (the next episode)

}

} “Rihanna & Harper” {

@WILLOW starts eyeroll_sarcastic

    WILLOW (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Reader why would you pick Rihanna-

    WILLOW (talk_armscrossed_angry_loop)
Anyways sorry that was your option..

    WILLOW (react_claphands_happy)
Let me just call them and ask if they want to go.

@WILLOW starts listen_phone_happy_loop

    NARRATOR
A few minutes later

@pause for 4

@WILLOW starts talk_phone_neutral_loop

@pause for 3

@WILLOW starts hangup_phone_neutral

    WILLOW (dance_armsup_hipthrust_loop)
Well Harper said she could go!!

    WILLOW (eyeroll_sarcastic)
Rihanna didn't even wanna go.

}