This is the first time I have ever done this… the link to it is above if you fancy a read. Feedback would be appriciated massivley. I actually have quite an intense scene in it as Its kinda based on my real life! The only thing i dont have in it is choices. I couldn’t figure out how to merge it on the app? Also when remove characters off the set… once or twice on the next scene I can see them walk past?
Sounds good, I think I’ll give it a read! Maybe put this in the ‘Promoting Your Story’ section. By any chance, was this inspired by the movie Girl’s Trip?
I have never seen the movie maybe I should if its good… I actually wrote it on true events… as sad as one bit of the story is it resulted into a girls trip to help me be distracted. If added bits in that arnt true to make it more exciting though… I wish my real life was as interesting ha. And thankyou for your advice. I was looking for a page to promote it but i must have missed it as new to this x
You should watch it! It’s hilarious, but very…inappropriate, so if you don’t like that sort of stuff then maybe don’t watch it Your story sounds really good and same. My life could be more interesting if I actually went out the house, but Netflix is better No problem x
Haha I dont inappropriate it probably suits me! Anything funny I’m all for! And same… I work 6 days a week for 9 hours so i love abit of sho wbox!
I dont mind inappropriate that should say x
It’s hilarious, definitely a good movie x
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