Hello! I just created my first story and it would mean a lot if you checked it out!
This is the story description- After getting drugged at a party, Bianca and her friends wake up in what seems to be a maze. With mystery, comedy and love awaiting you, will she be able to escape? You decide.
Hi! I will be gladly to read your story! I will give you my honest review about it, both positive and negative! It looks really interesting! Can’t wait to read it!
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Here is the description of my story :
Title : Jungle Fever
Author : Maggy
Genre : Romance/Drama
Style : Ink
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode
Description : A bad boy Prince with a lot of ego and a womanizer, gets lost in the middle of the Jungle and meets a fierce African Princess called Maya. Will he handle the change of environment ?
Wow, your story is really fantastic! I adore it so much!
Positive.
The diversity and humor is goals!
*I love the character’s relationships with her friends, it’s hilarious!
*The transitions are nice, it’s way different that mine.
*I like the beginning! It’s spectacular!
*Thank you for introducing the characters!
Negative.
*Not that many punctuations errors. But, one mistake was “Yes !” You don’t need to leave a space, but it should be “Yes!” For example.
*When the characters leave, it’s alright. It’s better than mine!
*The cover in the front is the comedy icon, I guess you don’t have one. I don’t consider this, a negative but I guess that’s fine. You do you!
If you fix the minor mistakes, your story will be awesome! I love it so much, it has potential to be in the popular section!