I just published my first 3 chapters of a story please let me know what you think

Hello Everyone, my name is Seven

I just started writing this story called web of lies. Please read it and give me feedback on how i can improve and so much more. i will really appreciate it. Update will be as regular as possible

The link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5188475904720896

i started reading and I clicked on the customisation of Anais’s eyes and chose an eye shape… but now I’m stuck at that stage, and there’s no option to exit.

Hi Alesha,
Thank you for the feedback. I have fixed it. please any other issue do let me know.
Thank you

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: