I just published my first 3 chapters of a story please let me know what you think


#1

Hello Everyone, my name is Seven

I just started writing this story called web of lies. Please read it and give me feedback on how i can improve and so much more. i will really appreciate it. Update will be as regular as possible

The link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5188475904720896


#2

i started reading and I clicked on the customisation of Anais’s eyes and chose an eye shape… but now I’m stuck at that stage, and there’s no option to exit.


#3

Hi Alesha,
Thank you for the feedback. I have fixed it. please any other issue do let me know.
Thank you


#4

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


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