I’ll Read Your Stories and Give Constructive Criticism

Hey there! I’ve been writing for 10 years and love helping people make their stories better. I will read the first three chapters of your story then pm you with good things I found in your story, things you could work on, and ways to fix it! I’ll be honest but never harsh, and instead of just picking out your flaws, I’ll give you ways to improve.

Fill out the form below if you’d like me to read your story.

Story Name:
Number of Chapters:
Brief Summary:

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Thank you for making this thread.
Here is my story.
Story title:
“I will always find you”(Limelight)
Amount of chapters:
12(ongoing)
Story description:
My life takes a dark turn. When I meet him. My only hope is to get out on time. If that is even possible.
Who can I trust, Who should I fear? Please help me, Someone’s watching.
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5941749403746304

Hope you like it.

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Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Chapters: 8
Description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close to them?
Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose - who will she become?

My story: Trust the Love
Title: Trust the love
Description:
Trusting in love is easier said than done.
Stubborn Cassie and serious Jackson find themself is the battle of finding true love
Go along with this intense and impactful love story.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6188648946335744

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Story name: Opposite in Harmony
Number of Chapters: 11 (finished)
Summary: Aimie is the princess of all angels and when she ran off to Earth, she met Devin, a demon. Horrible things started to happen at home after she met him. What would she do in this situation? Can she trust him? Can she trust her own family? Can she judge a book by its cover? Who will be there to have her back at this point?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5322669636845568
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Story Name: The Four Horsemen
Number of Chapters: 10 (ongoing)
Brief Summary: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter

I will be your Romeo by Kalani Santino
5 chapters published more to come
Eleni and Casey are from diffrent worlds what will happen when there paths cross, Can there ever be a happy ending?

Story Name: VINDICATION
Number of Chapters:4
Brief Summary:Like any other girl, Bella wants to have a fairytale wedding with her prince charming but her wedding day got bloody; it was the day she LOST EVERYTHING. When your life, Identity, Lovelife, everything you love has been taken away, Bella only has one choice, REVENGE. What awaits Bella in the game of revenge, justice and love,

Story name: Changing for Bad
Chapters: 7 (ongoing)
Description: What happens when you’ve become the monster you once feared? Is everyone you once held dear gone forever? Can you undo what you don’t feel is broken to risk losing more? Limited CC :blush::blush:

Story Name: Invisible to Undeniable
Number Of Chapters: 25
Brief Summary: A dorky girl transforms and gets the attention of the boy she likes, ends up loosing boy only to reunite years later
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4609852941664256

My story: Thriller: Tribe of Malapinchi
No. Of Chapters : 4
Description: Toss into a land of the sun, magic, lies and dark secrets. Can you make sense of the havoc you were tossed into and save everyone before it’s too late? CharacterCustomization
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5909308359180288

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This is my story!

TITLE : Color my life
AUTHOR : Lady Cannella
GENRE : Action
STYLE : ink
STATUS : on going
EPISODES : 3 (more coming soon)
DESCRIPTION : A mysterious place, a government full of secrets, a girl and the search of colors in a faded world…will you be able to restore the colors?
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Story name: The Minority
Number of chapters: 4
Summary: On and off cousins, an unexpected romance and your mother’s death! Will juggling these events tear you apart or is it for the greater good!?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6492146901581824
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Title: A Criminal’s Love by @episode.vel
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Chapters; 9

Description
The Salerno twins crossed path with the Davinci brothers.
He never knew that an ONE NIGHT GIRL will be his WORST NIGHTMARE.
He is DANGEROUS and she is POISON but LOVE is in the air

link–http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6085188591681536

link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5002839252664320

Title: Thrill of the Hunt (by Azaria Sin).

Number of chapters: 14 published chapters.

Brief summary: A violent serial killer is hunting street workers! You’re a detective partnered with a beautiful man: will you apprehend the psychopath forcing you to face your inner demons? [CC/MATURE] (Psychological thriller/murder-mystery, some romance and comedy)

I guess on quality, characters, pacing and plot is what you’re reviewing?

Story Name: Search for love
Number of Chapters: 17 ( more coming soon)
Brief Summary: Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation.Can you find the love you’re looking for trying to escape?

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My Story:
Author: May Laugh
Title: Trouble Twins
Instagram: maylaugh_episode
Genre: Romance (and a little comedy, too.)
Style: Ink
Description:
Danger. Passion. Love.
Always standing up for each other, going through thick and thin. That is what these twins are all about. But can they really master every chaos together?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5334870588784640

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As a young writer, you find inspiration in an unexpected place. Is the hot firefighter you wrote about really just a figment of your imagination? When your book becomes a movie, you’ll have to choose: lie or risk losing everything! CC, INK.

This story has two layers, some drama, a lot of romance and humor to keep it balanced.

Thank you in advance! :heart:

Title: TATYA: Professor Fever
Author: Giselle C.
Genre: Drama
Style: INK
Story Description: Tatyas life has been a series of unfortunate events. The only thing keeping her going is her love for law. Will the new hot prof keep her from achieving her goal?
Instagram: @gisellepisode
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Link:
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5795320466309120