Story title: From Zero to Hero
Story Genre: Action
Description of story: Jax is the disabled loser of Mediocreopolis High but one odd day, his life is transformed by a–burrito?!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4697049362202624
Hey everyone!
I’d like to promote my story called Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling here.
Below you can find the information you need to try it out.
Author: Mona K
Story Title: Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Comedy
Description: Cathyln is constantly picked on by her peers. Boys make fun of her and her “friends” make her do errands for them. Revenge her peers, betrayers and what if guy changes or not?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4830482803589120
Instagram: @monak.episode
Please make sure to follow me on Instagram to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!
I’m up for read for reads as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please! 
Hi, @Toriblack!
Thank you very much for creating this thread, this is very kind of you! Constructive criticism is exactly what I am looking for!
If you are interested in reading a story with several mini-games and where CHOICES REALLY MATTER then, please, give my story a try. I promise, the story will keep you hooked 
My story details:
Name of story: H & V: Fate
Author: Alex Af
Genre: Thriller
Episodes: 4 (completed)
Summary of story: Young ambitious journalist hunting down a powerful tycoon who has made a fortune based on lies. But who really is a villain here? Choices matter.
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Instagram: @episode.alex.af
Directing: the directing was alright but there wasn’t enough background characters to make some scenes realistic so 7/10 for directing
Plot: I like your plot so far there’s nothing really boring about it so 7/10 for plot
Things I like about your story: I like that you made the characters interesting
Things you need to improve on: you should improve giving different out fits to characters because the main character had the same outfit for 2 days
Overall score: 7/10
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Hi! Here’s my story. I hope you’ll like it!
Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance
Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/5630801559027712
IG: @authorlou.episode
Description:
Jason caught himself in a CRAZY, complicated situation. Watch out on how he will handle his true feelings for Alli. Will he fall in love with his DOG??
Directing: I really liked your directing it was perfect 9/10
Plot: I loved your plot, I added your book to my shelf. I loved how you added humour but at the same time you made the story line sad so 9/10 for plot
Things I like about your story: You made the character interesting some how and your narration was perfect it wasn’t long or boring.
Things you should improve on: working on adding overlays.
Overall score: 9/10
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Plot and a bit of directing: Sorry but I didn’t like the plot at all. There was too many long unexpected pauses I remember there was a girl shouting at Cathlyn and she wasn’t even facing the right way.But you added some humour in it so that’s good 6/10
Things I like in your story: I liked that you added humour in the story
Things you need to improve on: Directing!
Hey there, @Toriblack! Thank you for creating this thread! I’d love a review! Here are my story details:
Title: Silhouettes
Author: aprilish
Genre: Fantasy/Romance
Style: Ink
Blurb: Arion’s ready to risk it all to make her dreams come true. Leslie sees him every day, yet fails to recognize who he is. Watch them fall in love…without ever meeting each other.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6116658762874880
My Instagram: @aprilish.episode
Thank you so much! Looking forward to hearing your feedback! 
Thank you for the feedback.<3
Hey Tori,
Apparently I don’t receive any feedback on my story, so I would be interested in a honest review:
Story title: H & V: Challenge Accepted
Genre: Comedy
Description: You never wanted to be a superhero. But how could you say no when you manage to collect the weirdest squad ever?
https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/i/4528160294699008
Thanks!
Story title: No Longer An Average Teenager
Story Genre: Drama (But it is also fantasy)
Description of story: After Alex learns her best friend’s secret. She ends up being kidnapped and pregnant with the child of a vampire.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4532937287794688
Notes: The story is complete. Sometimes if you tap too fast when a character is walking it will mess up and not look right. (I’ve tried to fix it)
Hi @Toriblack,
Thank you for creating this thread! If you are still open for reviews, I would really appreciate some honest feedback
Story title: H & V: Lie to me
Genre: Drama/Mystery with romantic subplots
Description: After only serving 3 years of a 25 to life sentence, Aiden Suarez is mysteriously released. But wait, what’s that? Oh right, “Aiden Suarez” no longer exists.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6378501067505664
Can you send the link again, sorry it says error not found,
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Directing: I loved your directing! The start from the finish was perfect! I can’t even direct as good as you 10/10 for directing ( you’re the first person on this forum I gave 10 to)
Plot: I loved the plot it had humour but at the same time is was sad to read, I added your book to my favourites, I’m excited to read more episodes.
Things I like about your story: You had a huge plot twist in the first episode which made the story good.
Things you should improve on: I honestly you don’t need to improve on anything lol.
Overall score 10/10
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TYSM for doing this
Here is my story
Title: Break Down My Walls
Author: @moonlight123.episode
Genre: Action
Style: Ink
Description:You have your walls up. And no one ever comes in. But when you join a rebel gang, you feel attracted to the handsome leader. Can he melt your heart? Love, danger, lust awaits…
link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4509103137619968 2
Directing: I’m sorry but you didn’t have the best directing Alex kept using the same animation over 15 times (yes I was counting) and you didn’t portray your story well so 3/10 for directing.
Plot: I didn’t get your plot at all it was confusing and the first episode lasted a minute and the characters were over reacting and it annoyed me a little bit but I know how hard it can be writing a story so 4/10 for plot
Thing you should improve on your story: stop using the same animation in the story and add drama to the story
Overall score 3/10
Directing: Your directing isn’t the best but it’s OK the start of the story just annoyed me tbh so 5/10 for directing
Plot: you’re plot seems interesting but you didn’t show it in a interesting way which also annoyed me but so far my favourite character is Nathan. 5/10 for plot
Things I like about your story: you added some interesting overlays
Things you need to improve on: Add some action to your story
Overall score : 6/10
Here you go: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6548486212681728
Sometimes links don’t work though, so you may want to search by story or author name. My apologies for the inconvenience.
Title: The Right Lover
Genre: Romance
Author: Stephany Wright
Style: Limelight
Description: When a college girls love life falls apart, she decides to take a break from love, until she meets Brice. Get ready for action, drama, adventure, crime and romance (CC) Mature
Instagram: Stephanyepisode
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6447932230074368
Once it is a few episodes into the story has more drama, better directing, and the plot gets a lot better. Basically everything gets better a few episodes in. But thank you for the feedback.
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