I’m publishing my story soon

I’m publishing my story soon . Im already done with my 2 chapters :raised_hands:t2: and today I’m hoping to finish the chapter 3 . Would you mind to read it and give me some critics . It would be awesome if you dol . :blush::ok_hand:t2:

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Sure, thank you.

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What’s it about? If I like the description, I might give it a read :wink:. And I love your profile pic. Adventure Time is the best

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Hmmm, there’s you {your character} a poet in heart , who’s always end up with a broken heart and always wonder why? It’s your first day of school. Then suddenly all your ex crush & lovers is going in the same school. Would you survive your school year and focus on your career or you’ll be defeated by heart aches and dramas

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I like it! I’ll love to give it a read when it comes out

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Yay! I’ll update you when it come out. Thank you

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