I Need A Judgmental B*tch to Read Something for Me

#1

Some constructive but blunt criticism is needed for a bit of dialog I can’t tell is good or not (does that even make sense as a sentence?) and have been looking at too long to tell the difference anyway. Hit me up for details.

#2

im judgemental as heck. hmu with details

#3

I can help with that, I’m super judgey with dialogue

#4

Hey willing to reveiw my story loll?

#5

Yeah totally, DM me on instagram it’s easier to communicate there lol
@episode.ashsmashum

#6

I’'ll do that. I fit your criteria

#7

Also, I judge everything EVERYTHING.

#8

I’ve been criticised a lot on here for my bluntness, so shoot! :stuck_out_tongue:

#9

haha same.

#10

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:

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