Some constructive but blunt criticism is needed for a bit of dialog I can’t tell is good or not (does that even make sense as a sentence?) and have been looking at too long to tell the difference anyway. Hit me up for details.
im judgemental as heck. hmu with details
I can help with that, I’m super judgey with dialogue
Hey willing to reveiw my story loll?
Yeah totally, DM me on instagram it’s easier to communicate there lol
I’'ll do that. I fit your criteria
Also, I judge everything EVERYTHING.
I’ve been criticised a lot on here for my bluntness, so shoot!
Closing due to one month of inactivity