Hi I’m currently writing a story where I try and create long and meaningful choices. I have created the first branch of a fairly long choice (it circles back to the main story though)
The choices are
“Run away from the police department”
“Trust Officer Adams”
When you press the first one it takes you on a detour with more choices and interesting people before circling back to the story. But if you choose “trust officer adams” it basically just goes straight to the main story… And I’m sad knowing that some people will choose that option. Thats why I need something quirky and fun to happen!
In the run away option she meets a woman and her son, (even though the son has like 6 lines he is my favorite character in my entire story )
The son is hilarious and the mother asks questions where the right or wrong answer will have different consequences.
For the “Trust officer Adams” choice nothing special really happens. So i need something… a scenario that happens outside of the police department. I have tried creating a character and I have made several scenes with him, but I can’t make it work! In one scene the MC has to help him with a phone call to his furious wife, in the other scene I made he knocks her out and kidnaps her. But they both just seem so unnatural and out of place.
What could happen?
Thanks in advance