I Need A Scene Fixing (LL) (werewolf marking)

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Lucas & Aria are marking each other (werewolf) but it looks wrong when he bites her

INT. ENCHANTED UNDERWATER CAVE

@cut to zone 2

&LUCAS stands screen left AND LUCAS faces right AND LUCAS is think_rubchin
&ARIANNA stands screen right AND ARIANNA is admire_happy AND ARIANNA faces left
ARIANNA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Our cave
@ARIANNA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
LUCAS (talk_flirt_charming)
I cant think of a better place to finish our date
LUCAS (talk_gossip)
Are you ready?
@ARIANNA is listen_nod_happy_loop
@LUCAS walks to screen center
@LUCAS is biteneck_give_aggressive_rear AND ARIANNA is biteneck_receive_terrified

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What exactly looks off?

You should definitely layer them, so that he is on top of her:

&LUCAS stands screen left AND LUCAS faces right AND LUCAS is think_rubchin
&LUCAS moves to layer 1 AND ARIANA moves to layer 0
&ARIANNA stands screen right AND ARIANNA is admire_happy AND ARIANNA faces left
ARIANNA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Our cave
@ARIANNA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
LUCAS (talk_flirt_charming)
I cant think of a better place to finish our date
LUCAS (talk_gossip)
Are you ready?
@ARIANNA is listen_nod_happy_loop
@LUCAS walks to screen center
@LUCAS is biteneck_give_aggressive_rear AND ARIANNA is biteneck_receive_terrified

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how do i layer him so hes on top of her?

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I highlighted it in my answer :slight_smile:

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it looks like he is biting the air not her lol

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If you preview the story, there’s a button on the right “Show Helpers” then “Spot Directing”. Then you’ll be able to place the characters closer together if that’s what you mean. Here’s a tutorial on that: Placing Characters Tutorial

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you need to put them on layers, face them snd I instead of simple directing wound personally use spot directing…7

but this should work too:

INT. ENCHANTED UNDERWATER CAVE

@cut to zone 2

&LUCAS stands screen left AND LUCAS faces right AND LUCAS is think_rubchin AND LUCAS moves to layer 2
@ARIANNA stands screen right AND ARIANNA is admire_happy AND ARIANNA faces left AND ARIANNA moves to layer 1
ARIANNA (talk_smile_happy_loop)
Our cave
@ARIANNA is idle_shiftweight_neutral_loop
LUCAS (talk_flirt_charming)
I cant think of a better place to finish our date
LUCAS (talk_gossip)
Are you ready?
@ARIANNA is listen_nod_happy_loop
@LUCAS walks to screen center
&LUCAS is biteneck_give_aggressive_rear AND LUCAS faces left
@ARIANNA is biteneck_receive_terrified AND ARIANNA faces right

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