I need a serious and harsh review please. <3

Oh what direction issue do you have in mind ? So that I can correct it :slight_smile:

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In the firstly scene when she wakes up!! That one!! I think you need to @pan to zone 1 in that line!! Just my opinion :grin:

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okayyy I’ll check it out thanks !!

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:joy: I will read your story btw but not yet. later when I have more time :joy:

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sure !!! don’t worry i’m updating a thing or two it will be up in 3 days i think.

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Sure I will wait :crazy_face::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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thank you ! You’re so nice :))))

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I can do a review, but for your forum post it seem more like you are advatising are you sure you are looking for a review.

note mine arent to promote because I dont share them but to help you improve

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No i’m looking for review and feedbacks :slight_smile:

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You are also so sweet :smiling_face_with_three_hearts::kissing_closed_eyes:

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You can request ine from @Episeekers on instagram they are really good.

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Thank you i will :slight_smile: :grin:

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I have no Idea, i’m honestly just hoping or waiting for some miracle. because I honestly don’t think it’s possible :frowning: But i’ll keep praying everyday and i’ll do some marketing

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You’re welcome :grin:

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Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for reviews. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about creating topics, and feel free to PM me if you’ve got questions. :smiley:

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i can do it!

hey ! I’d love too if you could :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

could you put it in my forums (:

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