I need a simple script template ~asap~... again *plz and thx will give credit*


#1

Ok so… now I need a script template where the reader’s mc (titled, “YOU”) is running into a road in the night. (Its dumb for her to do that, but she’s drunk so she is not sane right now… okay…) And then she gets hit by any car overlay. I’d like a sound effect, possible like a flash or something, and then the screen goes black and narrator says “Always watch where your going…” Thanks I hope you can make it happen! (Also if overlay effect dim 60 can be put too, that’d be great! I’ll give you your own section of credit at the end of the story, too…. Also @Janeger Thanks for doing my other one. If you’re not to busy to do this one… that would rlly help thanks so so so so so so so much. Byt anyone else, please offer help too.
EXT. JUVIE OLIVER ROW HOME - NIGHT

or
EXT. SAIGON STREET - NIGHT

or
EXT. SMALL ALLEY PARIS - NIGHT

or
EXT. URBAN STREET - NIGHT

Please note that I actually tried about three times to do it myself, but I never got it right, so I really need this…


#2

If possible, adding the background would enable spot directing to anyone wanting to help. I’d be happy to aid you, I would just like more details. :slight_smile:

I also need to know the style for animations.


#3

Oh ok! Great I’ll find one! Give me one minute!


#4

EXT. JUVIE OLIVER ROW HOME - NIGHT

or

EXT. SAIGON STREET - NIGHT

or

EXT. SMALL ALLEY PARIS - NIGHT

or

EXT. URBAN STREET - NIGHT
Whatever one you think will be easiest…


#5

Is it okay if I use EXT. JEZEBEL STREET - NIGHT? Or would you rather I pick from the four.

Also, what style would you like this in?


#6

It’s ink. That background is more than fine! If its not too hard… can you at least try with small alley paris… you dont have to. dont worry. just do what you please!


#7

Okay, awesome! Will start now!


#8

EXT. SMALL ALLEY PARIS - NIGHT with EFFECT DIM 60 in zone 1 at layer 8 with CAR2SIDE to 2.854 -33 -12 in zone 5 at layer 10 with CAR LIGHT to 5.140 -358 -45 in zone 5 at layer 11

&zoom reset

&cut to zone 3

&YOU spot 0.559 362 371 in zone 3 at layer 1

@YOU walks to spot 0.559 68 392 in 3 AND YOU is run_athletic_offset

@YOU is run_fall

@YOU is stand_up

@YOU is laugh_guffaw

&pan to zone 2 in 2

@YOU walks to spot 0.559 221 430 in zone 2 in 2 AND YOU is run_athletic_offset

@YOU faces right

@YOU is dance_disco_loop

&pan to zone 1 in 3

@YOU walks to spot 0.721 67 257 in zone 1 in 3 AND YOU is run_athletic_offset

&overlay CAR LIGHT shifts to -358 -45 in 3

&overlay CAR2SIDE shifts to -33 -12 in 3

sound carhorn_beepbeep

&YOU is dance_jazzhands

@pause for a beat

@YOU faces right

sound carhorn_beepbeep

@YOU is idle_terrified

&YOU is fall

sound car_screech

@zoom on 320 404 to 250% in 0.1

@zoom on 0 481 to 250% in 0.03

@zoom on 308 5 to 250% in 0.09

@zoom on 0 481 to 250% in 0.03

@zoom on 308 5 to 250% in 0.09

@zoom on 0 481 to 250% in 0.03

@zoom on 308 5 to 250% in 0.09

@zoom on 320 82 to 250% in 0.1

@zoom on 320 568 to 250% in 0.2

@transition fade out black

INT. BLACK - DAY

    NARRATOR
|color:blue, outline:black, animation:shake, bold| Always watch where you're going...

CAR2SIDE: pv1_back_CAR2SIDE_5714468482842624_96678b28e42f73f627c703974812f353

CAR LIGHT: pv1_back_CAR_LIGHT_5760744339537920_96678b28e42f73f627c703974812f353-1

(It looks invisible because it’s white.)


Hope this works! To credit me, simply say, “Car crash scene by KC, the author of Lawa Bay.”


#9

Thanks!


#10

@KCPopcore

Could you please resend the car light? It’s not working…


#11

pv1_back_CAR_LIGHT_5760744339537920_96678b28e42f73f627c703974812f353-1


#12

tysm


#13

Hi! I know this wasn’t specifically made for me but I was wondering if you could send me the car light overlay too? You don’t have to, sorry if this is weird or annoying.


#14

Hi! I’m so sorry, I’d recommend checking with @Dahlia_Blossom to ensure its okay if you can use the script, simply because it will be implemented in her story. :slight_smile:

If its alright with her, and once I receive confirmation, then I’ll send it over.


#15

Okay so I am also doing a car crash scene and I would really appreciate it if you let me use the same overlay (car lights) in my story?