I need someone who’s good at English and is a good writer to help me make a scene more natural.
It’s the MC and LI’s first date, and the dialogue is currently just kind of awkward and unrealistic, so I need a writer to help me write good dialogue for it.
Whats happening in the scene?
It’s just a regular date.
Can you help me write the scene better?
ofc so what’s the setting?
I’ll pm you what I have so far
Thank you so much! I’ll pm you what I have so far
Hey, I’ll be happy to help you
Actually, I already got help, sorry. Thanks for offering!
It’s ok, girl.
I wish you a lot of blessings towards your story.