I Need Advice (INK)

how should i end this scene
my characer Arianna has just found out that not only is lucas the guy she slept with but also her step sisters fiancee

this is the scene so far

INT. DELTA HOUSE FOYER - DAY
@cut to zone 3
@zoom on 960 376 to 199% in 0
@ARIANNA spot 1.280 259 2 AND ARIANNA starts think
@transition fade in black in 4
@KATINA spot 1.280 104 17 AND KATINA faces right
@LUCAS spot 1.280 188 -7 in zone 2 AND LUCAS faces right AND LUCAS is arms_crossed
ARIANNA (talk_neutral_deny)
You?
@cut to zone 2
@ARIANNA starts shush
@zoom on 527 0 to 271% in 0
@zoom on 527 358 to 271% in 4
@pause for a beat
LUCAS (talk_happy_agree)
Hello, miss, Arianna.
@cut to zone 3
@zoom on 640 315 to 144% in 1
@KATINA is think
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@KATINA faces right
@pause for a beat
@KATINA faces left
@pause for a beat
@KATINA faces right
@pause for a beat
@KATINA faces left
@pause for a beat
@KATINA faces right
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
KATINA (talk_think)
Are you okay?
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 960 340 to 221% in 0
ARIANNA
(Seriously i slept with my stepsisters fiancee’.)
@KATINA spot 1.280 163 7
ARIANNA
(I should feel bad he didnt tell me he was engaged.)
@LUCAS spot 1.316 62 0 AND LUCAS starts think_loop
@ARIANNA moves to layer 1
ARIANNA
(Still though…)
@ARIANNA starts disappointed
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 801 330 to 169% in 0
KATINA (talk_call_out)
Arianna!
@zoom on 960 361 to 243% in 0
ARIANNA (talk_startled)
What!
@zoom reset
KATINA (laugh_chuckle)
You zoned out for like an hour.
@ARIANNA starts eyeroll_subtle
KATINA (talk_think)
So, how do you two know each other?
@ARIANNA is idle_awkward
@KATINA faces left
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 640 388 to 225% in 1
LUCAS (talk_doubtful)
She works at the bar i own.
@pause for a beat
@zoom on 652 302 to 134% in 1

How long is the whole Episode?

this is the first scene of episode 2 she says you? at the end of episode 1 and it carries onto episode 2

Yeah, it’s a good idea to end this scene there

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