I need an honest opinion for my 2 first chapters

I’m looking for a few people to give me an honest opinion for the first 2 chapter of my story, I haven’t publish yet but I can send you the link to check on it if you’re interested to help me to understand if there’s something to fix.

I can do it for you

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thank you :heart:

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