I need an HONEST review plz

Guys lets make a thread for cringe Old scripts :joy::joy:

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I have written a lot of stories but i have never published them
some stories are never meant to be seen

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Give me a sec Ill @ u there

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Facts :ok_hand:t4::ok_hand:t4: I have like what 30+ hiding in the dark :skull:

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Also let’s not talk about

"He came closer and closer until his breath was merely a inch away from the back of my head.

& "Then…

Pitter patter…

Like the sound of rain.

Water droplets ran down my cheeks and stained the wooden floor.

The grip became looser as he realized.
"

LMAO honestly wtf was I doingg :face_with_hand_over_mouth: :rofl:

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I have two …the titles man :joy: :joy: :rofl:

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Okay guys this is episode 2 :joy::sob::sob:

Who told me to -
:joy::sob:

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How could I say that in only EPISODE 2​:joy::joy:

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Not the “cravings” :rofl: :sob:

The fact they’re so close to the camera but so far apart is KILLING me :skull: :sob:

My spot directing was terrible :joy::joy::joy:

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And why tf is she as tall as the ceiling :face_with_hand_over_mouth: :sob:

Yours was in episode two…i wrote one and they were cuffed in episode 1

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Girl all I knew back then was screen center left and right
How could I make him smaller than her tho :joy::joy:

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:joy::joy::joy:

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I was hella dramatic
My MC was always either “LeT’s Go To StArBUcks BoO <33”
or “I want to kill myself. Nobody loves me. I’m going to go drown in my insecurities” with a long description of their eyelashes and how fast their tears drop.

There’s no inbetween :skull: :joy: :sob:

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My 3rd episode was the worst,:sob:

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I never even GOT to my third episode. Everytime I wrote like 1-2 chapters I’d start another story with a cringy title like “The Defeaning Silence” and everything was horribly misspelled and too close to the camera :skull: :joy:

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Babes

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