I need beta-readers to give me advice!

Can some of you guys please read my story! I need advice on how to improve it! EP. 5 was just published today…
The link to read my story is: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6380010134700032
Please be sure to comment advice. :3

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i’ll read it now!

Moved to Share Feedback since you’re looking for advice on your story. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to ask me if there are any questions. :wink: