I need critics to help me! I can help you too!

I need critics because I have no idea what I’m doing and I need to know my first story isn’t total crap. If it is please let me know so I can fix it. I need good feedback meaning don’t hold back on how you feel about it. Let me know if you would like me to be your critic as well because I am very honest when people ask me to be.

My story is called: “Kaylee Girly”

Author: Yoshi

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I’ll check it later today :blush:

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