I need extras! - LL

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 5:04pm

aaaaa it me

yay

(My hair colors a lil off but it looks better like that in the scene anyway)

writer_em · May 31, 2019, 6:54pm

Thanks x

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 7:37pm

Oh, I’m sorry! I should have confirmed which one. I can still change it if you like?

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 7:38pm

It’s fine. I’d look weird as a police officer with my hair this bright. Also love the talk animations in the background, nice touch.

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 7:49pm

Totally up to you. A lot of people have bright hair in this town

And thank you so much! I didn’t want it to look stiff.

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 7:57pm

It’s up to you if you wanna change it, you’re the writer and I know readers hate when their episode gets reset. You’re right about the bright hair, the hair dye economy over there must be insane

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 8:01pm

I have an addiction to bright hair, what can I say? I just had to update anyway. Shoot. Now I’m gonna have to update again to give a skip option!

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 8:06pm

Won’t that eat the points if you give a skip option

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 8:07pm

…good point. Darn it. I knew I shouldn’t have changed the text art but I couldn’t help myself Time to brainstorm a solution.

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 8:15pm

I mean, you could code a version that if you say you’ve read it before, cuts out extra scenes with just the points remaining

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 8:54pm

It looks like I’m stuck making people replay. I think I’ll give an extra point in the next chapter to try to make up for it. This is why you don’t decide to change your story at 1am!

Kittimu · May 31, 2019, 9:13pm

Ugh. Good luck!

Gwen-Bruce · May 31, 2019, 9:15pm

Thank you! I’ve learned my lesson for sure.