I need feedback experienced readers and writers!

Hey everyone!

So I have just posted the first three episodes of my first EVER story (finally!) I was really hoping to get some feedback for future chapters! I have already completed the fourth one and am working on the fifth but any and all feedback is greatly appreciated. There are a few GEM choices as I know it’s important to boost my story but there aren’t too many (because I know how frustrating they are!). Hope you like it :smiley:

Full CC for MC and LI!

Description: Hidden secrets become more and more present this summer. But when a life-or-death situation occurs. Do you choose to help him? Or is he hiding a secret too.

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6140459535237120

I am happy to do a R4R if u just reply below! :heart:

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