Can I have your HONEST feedback please (on the drawing at the top)? It can be really harsh tho, that would help me a lot actually. I would also appreciate any tutorials, links to them, etc.
I realize that eyebrows and hair don’t look very good, so if you have tips on them, or just any other thing, please tell me!
Don’t worry, I won’t get offended, that’s why I’m asking to be honest, you’d really help me a lot if you’d tell what’s wrong, or not really good here and maybe how to make them look better…
I’ll appreciate any reply I’ll get, Ty
I think you need more light and dark values in the hair
and I would like a shadow on the parts of her skin is touching the hair. I don’t know how to explain it
and an out line around the hair because the rest of her has an outline
The could have more texture in it (I can see lines in it but I want more near the T zone)
like its more feathered at the right part
Tysm,
I can’t really make them thicker, because the girl gave me details of her character, and there was “thin high” eyebrows, so they gotta be thin at this one lol I wanted them to look a bit more hairy, but then again, they would look way thicker, so now as I think about all of this I think I should change my eyebrow drawing style or maybe I had to drew even thinner eyebrows, so the hair would make them more thick
It kinda reminds me maths
the colours are nice, my problem is its traced, honestly tracing dont really help learning how to draw.
the hair dont have a proper parting, I can see some of your others pictures do have it though
also because it traces the white spot on her eyes is in the wrong place, the white spot are supposed to be on the side of what she looks at, and episode have the eyes drawn so they always look in front of her which with the placing of her pupils she is not doing so it looks weird in my opinion,
I would also appreciate any tutorials, links to them, etc.
or maybe I had to drew even thinner eyebrows, so the hair would make them more thick 
