I need feedback on my new story

Hi! I just published my new story and would enjoy some feedback. It would help a lot (: thanks if you do.

I have added your story to my list. I’ll try to check it as quicly as possible. It would be great if you find time to read my contest story “H & V: Fake Friend” (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6167433466478592). Thanks in advance. I’ll contact you once finished reviewing your story. :slight_smile:

Hi, I’ll check out your story! I’m in the same position as I just published my first story so if you have a minute I’d be grateful if you could check it out!

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: