I need feedback on my new story!

Hey guys I decided to finally put the story that I’ve been working for a while out there for once and I would really appreciate if you guys could give me some feedback !
I’ve made a lot of changes since I last made a post about asking to review the story.

The story (Fantasy) is called Divina, it’s based on a girl that lives with her grandma and aunt in an Island, and before her upcoming 15th birthday weird things started to happen to her.

Here’s the link ! Lmk what you think🥰
And it be best if it was an honest review so I can get better at coding and writing !

It sounds interesting! I’ll check it out if I have time : )

1 Like

Thank you ! :two_hearts: