I need feedback on my story!


#1

HEY! I would love if I could recieve some feedback!

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being the Hybrid Queen is not easy. War, love, and betrayal awaits.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, 5 Endings, Choices Matter

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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#2