I need feedback on this idea

Hey I had this fun idea for a concept in a story and before I publish it I wanted to know just what people think about it.
It’s basically a detective story where you don’t have a character that is you on screen but you are the character yourself. does that make any sense?
The characters talk directly to you and look at you.
What do you think??


So you’re seeing the world in first point of view? That’s different, I like it! :smiley:

OMG!! I think that’s a good idea I’d definitely read it!! :white_heart:

OH MY GOD- is would be like virtual reality kinda? That sounds AWESOME!

That idea is awesome actually! My only hesitation would be that there are not a ton of “looking at the camera” animations, but I think that’s a super different idea! I like it :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I think that would be interesting

Very different. (In a good way) I would totally read and it sounds very interesting! :dizzy::white_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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