Hi fellow writers and readers! My story, In the County, has been out for awhile, and I’ve already edited it once. To be honest my first few episodes are not as well-written as the later ones because it was my first story and I have learned _a lot _ since then about directing. I want to continue this story- but these first episodes are discouraging, and I want to know what the readers think.
Would you read further into the story?
What would make it better?
Should I continue this story? (Probably will but I want to know your opinion.)
I’m also editing a new title scene, so it is only featured in the work in progress episode 7.
Here’s the link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5184933012570112
Thank you for supporting me and giving me feedback!